Need feedback on first adventure in new campaign for Saga Edition Star Wars!

Attn: Mods--I don't know where else to post this, so I apologize ahead of time if it's in the wrong forum. Just finished posting the first adventure in the Shadows of the Past campaign setting I'm designing for Saga Edition Star Wars RPG here , and would love to get some feedback on it. If you like it, great, tell me why. If you don't, great, tell me why. I'll be starting work on the second adventure probably tomorrow. If you would like to help, even better! I can do it all on my own, but it will take forever, and I'd rather make it a collaborative effort. I still have a lot of maps to do, and I need to tweak this second adventure towards the end. Feedback is greatly appreciated!

Looks good so far

Thanks, David L. I'm starting work on the second adventure, and this is one that bogs down a bit, so I'm trying to fix it. It's also the one that really sets the tone for the rest of the campaign.

Your hand drawn maps are very difficult to align to the grid. Not impossible, just difficult.

Soft said: Your hand drawn maps are very difficult to align to the grid. Not impossible, just difficult. Yeah, sorry about that, Soft. At the time I drew them, I was working with inferior tools. That is no longer a problem. It might also be because of the way they are scaled to fit on the page. You can get just the maps on my deviantart site in the Star Wars Campaign Setting folder located here , and that should make things a little easier to scale and align to Roll20's grid. I really need to learn to use this Campaign Cartographer software I bought...