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looking for feed back on improvised homebrew d20 moderen campaigns

I have two ideas for worlds that are of what I call collapsed universe. they both will have the same basic rules and to some extent classes but each will be based of totally different ideas. they will be fan fict like universes but  in each the universe due to evolutionary growing pains has collapsed them into the following to univeres.{both still in works] {code name:holy bio punk}= the game has this as it's base. the world is bi shock but collapsed so that it is one universe. though in this bio shock stile steam punk there is this one religion with many factions. basically it's jedi and sith meet the groups of bleach. so each group in bleach.{for example the soul society, bounts, or quincies[} arte divided factions. this leads to a power strugle in the theocracy of rapture. so your main classes are the jedi times bleach faction you are a part of. though there are secondary classes do to the fact that genetic mutation and experimentation has been going on. thus your secondary two classes are pokemon classes. { codde anem: war is guilded=modern vs traditional guild systems.} basically i take the modern world scenario of war is a corprate thing but OI add different factions.a.k.a ninja villages{via naruto} seed{like in ff8 plus soul eater} and state alchemist{like in fullmetal alchemist.}. each style  of war corporation gives there units different abilities this there are different ways two class. basically ff5 classes and other types of classes that i like. they fight for domanace ut there is no real winner. p.s. so my question is will I be able to start these fa prgs and are they understandable world or are they to complicated. i would like to give them both the same basic book but an additional guide is ned for both plus the d20 modern system. also there both just concepts right now.plus I need gm's. so any advise.
somebody suggested I run this in the evil hat fate system. so it's still in work
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Gauss
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ok thanks lol
While i'm familiar with all the games and animes you are getting influences from, its hard to understand what your vision is based on the short discriptions and refrences. I suggest that you start writing out how these factions and classes interact and flesh out your ideas a bit more.