Piling on: -In Wave Echo Cave, the Flameskull should shed light. From the monster entry: “ Illumination . The flameskull sheds either dim light in a
15-foot radius, or bright light in a 15-foot radius and dim light for an
additional 15 feet. It can switch between the options as an action.” -In Redbrand Hideout, the
Skeleton tokens do not have an AC. -In Cragmaw Hideout, Klarg is
missing his “buffed hp” marker. -The lighting on Redbrand Hideout
is dark; it should be well lit. From the text: “ Light. Most areas are
brightly lit by oil lamps in wall sconces, refilled every few hours as needed.” -In Wave Echo Cave, the Flameskull
token does not have an AC. -Glasstaff’s AC is listed as 12 per
the Evil Wizard entry, but he wields a Staff of Defense which grants +1 AC.
Token AC should reflect this, or at least match Sildar's format with 12 (13). -Both Glasstaff and The Black Spider NPC entries are empty character sheets listed as Barbarian 1, despite having monster entries just like the other NPCs. Perhaps this was to include their spell list (which are still not included, and Reidoth's entry belies that conclusion); regardless, their entries are incomplete. Bonus Round: DM quibbles -Grid alignment is not great. This
would be perfectly acceptable for a homemade map, but it is definitely possible to be
more accurate than what is done here. Same goes for Line of Sight drawing. -There are a few tokens
(Skeletons in the Redbrand Hideout, Zombies in Wave Echo Cave, Venomfang) that are hidden on the GM layer
with no text to support this decision. -Wave Echo Cave #20 brazier sheds light but it is not
described as lit, while several other braziers clearly describe their burning coals. Cragmaw Castle #8
describes a brazier, and also specifically states that the room is completely
dark. -Trees in the Ruins of Thundertree
block Line of Sight, but there is not similar treatment of the stalagmites in
Cragmaw Hideout and Wave Echo Cave. Given that they are called out as being able
to provide cover (“ Stalagmites. These upthrust spires of rock can provide cover”),
this seems like an oversight. -There are no NPC entries for Hamun Kost or Mirna Dendrar (or Agatha). Given there is significant opportunity for interaction, including giving the party a quest, they seem at least as worthy of an entry as the included NPCs. Edit: Riley replied while I was sourcing some of these. Thanks for the response, hopefully this continues to fall under "constructive" criticism!