Looking for group original game I made.

<a href="https://app.roll20.net/campaigns/details/2530161" rel="nofollow">https://app.roll20.net/campaigns/details/2530161</a> My time zone is LA CA US

You should put your time zone in your profile. It helps GMs and players choose you.&nbsp;

While I was intrigued at first, the lack of punctuation and proper grammar was off-putting. As a result of that, I don't even know what the actual requirements are for a character- nor what your statements about starting level actually mean. Do I start at level one? Do I start at level 20? I can't even tell.

oh thanks let me fix that edit: okay I think I've got it but please tell me if I miss anything

Roland C. said: While I was intrigued at first, the lack of punctuation and proper grammar was off-putting. As a result of that, I don't even know what the actual requirements are for a character- nor what your statements about starting level actually mean. Do I start at level one? Do I start at level 20? I can't even tell. okay I've fix it I think. Sorry for bad spelling

Do you have a pdf or something with the rules for this orginal game? Or is it based off a current game. Like dnd 5e?

Now that it is readable, I have the same issues as Lavathor. I don't know the actual details of the game rules- and worse, your statement of 'no sidequests' is effectively stating you will railroad us. That is not something I am interested in.

Roland C. said: Now that it is readable, I have the same issues as Lavathor. I don't know the actual details of the game rules- and worse, your statement of 'no sidequests' is effectively stating you will railroad us. That is not something I am interested in. okay maybe I will add some side quests. Ill do what ever it takes to be good thank you for your feed back.

Okay I've added three side quest

Roland C. said: Now that it is readable, I have the same issues as Lavathor. I don't know the actual details of the game rules- and worse, your statement of 'no sidequests' is effectively stating you will railroad us. That is not something I am interested in. Oh hey I can fix my campaign you can help me by copy the campaign description and point out the problems so I can fix it. I'm not that good at spotting the problems okay thanks and I appreciate the feedback

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Roland C. said: <a href="http://hemingwayapp.com/" rel="nofollow">http://hemingwayapp.com/</a> Just use that. It should help markedly. thanks

Sorry I couldn't get it my card was declined NM I've got it now&nbsp;

okay I think I've thanks for the help Roland C.