As is, if a character is in a players journal but they are unable to edit it, there is no place for them to write down any information about that character. And, if they CAN edit the character, all that information goes to anyone who looks at the entry in their journal. For me, this would be helpful since my players could jot down small pieces of information that a recurring NPC divulges. Everyone picks up on different things, and having a place for notes for each character that is specific to each player would be useful.