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New Token Pack - Female Heroes 2

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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
Hey everyone! I'm back with a new token pack! This one is to compliment my previous one, 72 high quality, digitally hand painted tokens featuring 5 different fantasy archetypes perfect for Dungeon & Dragons, Pathfinder, Dungeon World, etc. Here's the link and banner: <a href="https://goo.gl/qupvHp" rel="nofollow">https://goo.gl/qupvHp</a> I took into account all the feedback I got from the previous pack and tried to apply it to this one; I used different anatomy tools to help me with the proportions a little more, hopefully it made a difference (I am my worst critic). I'm very proud of the final product and I can honestly not pick a favorite one. I know I do this every time, but I can't post these without thanking everyone for all the support you have given me since I started posting my tokens on the marketplace. Please feel free to reply or message me with any feedback or questions you have, I always try to reply to each and every one of you; I love this community! As for the next pack, I think it's time to move on from humans and work on other races. Right now the leading one is Elves so I will start with them, I'm planning to make their clothes, weapons, and armor very elf-like so it should be fun and distinctly different from my humans. Cheers! Fernando
These look great! I think the tweeks you made have vastly improved the appeal of these tokens without losing your unique style. Just fabulous.
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Kryx
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Not to be overly negative again, but I can't see past the head issue again. The heads of the 3 females in the middle (and top right and top left) are much bigger than some of the surrounding ones. It may look fine in actual usage, but in comparison the female on the middle right looks like she has her head shrunken.
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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
Sorry for the late replies; I was taken care of my baby all day today while the wife was at work :) Thank you very much for your kind words and your support Ed ! Thank you for taking the time to provide feedback Mark , I had already finished working on the Druid and Mage by the time the previous pack went live so I couldn't apply the new head technique until the next two classes. I have since changed my anatomy references so heads in future packs should be closer to what the Monk and Bard heads are in this pack, hopefully that will earn me your support in the future :)
Great work Fernando, I have several players who are rather demanding about what their tokens' appearance and these new tokens of your were met favorably.
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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
Thank you, Erich, that is the highest compliment!
+5
I don't get the criticism at all. I think your perspective is spot on. I think what might be misleading is the angle. I think they are excellent. +
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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
LOL thanks Chris! Thank you, michael ; criticism is always tough to hear but as an artist it's the only way to get better at your craft/passion. I definitely appreciate your compliment, it really means a lot when you guys like what I'm putting out there because I dedicate a lot of time and work to it so your comment validates my effort. I think some of the criticism is valid and some of it has more to do with personal taste (Which is perfectly fine.), so I do try to differentiate between the two as best I can and adjust accordingly. I'm proud of my work and I don't release anything that I wouldn't use myself, but I understand there is always room for improvement :)
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Kryx
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Ya, sorry if it came off too negative. The art on the equipment and clothing is fantastic. The head perspective is mainly just the size issue, but you said you've solved that for the future so :) My players generally go Male, but if any go female I'll take a closer look at this.
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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
No worries, Mark , I was talking about criticism in general; what I've gotten here, Twitter, DeviantArt, other forums, etc. I'm grateful that you took the time to post a reply. Roll20's Community in general always gives me very polite and constructive criticism which I love and appreciate, no artist can expect their audience to love everything they do and none of us should think that everything we do is amazing and flawless, the opposite is usually the case :) Anyway, please don't feel bad, I'm grateful that you take the time to post on my threads and you do it in a polite and helpful manner! As for the heads, in future packs they should be closer to what the Bard and Monk are like on this one. It's a tricky perspective to get right, and you are limited to the amount of interesting poses you can do but it's a fun challenge nonetheless. Lastly, I'd be remiss if I didn't mention I do have two Male Hero packs as well ;) <a href="https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/set/185/huma" rel="nofollow">https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/set/185/huma</a>... <a href="https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/set/251/huma" rel="nofollow">https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/set/251/huma</a>... Here's the rest of my packs if you guys haven't had a chance to check them out <a href="https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/search/Ferna" rel="nofollow">https://marketplace.roll20.net/browse/search/Ferna</a>... :)
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Kryx
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I have both male ones and the goblin one. :) Keep up the good work.
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Vanderforge
Marketplace Creator
Mark said: I have both male ones and the goblin one. :) Keep up the good work. Ha! Thanks! I double appreciate you taking the time to provide me with feedback now :)