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Post Character Sheets Here! (Archived, Closed 1/12/18)

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Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Originally made it with the Wizards character builder so if further explanation of the numbers is needed, let me know. Yes we need you to actually fill everything out.  "I built it on the builder" is not a substitute. Sorry I did not mean to imply that I didn't put everything on the sheet.  Just said if their needed to be discussion about it I would be more then happy to go over it. I did not take it as something you were implying.  You are missing a good bit of things on the sheet. I'll try and treat this like a sheet as if it had things properly filled out. Your array isn't listed Your level up bonuses are not listed Your armor is unequipped and you seem to show an enhancement bonus of 5 for some reason. your neck is not equipped, or you put all the numbers in the wrong column How you spent your money is not listed (And when I spent your money I did not come up with the same numbers) Your armor is listed as 'drakescale'  which is not available at +1 enhancement You did not list what benefit you get form your background You did not label where your powers are from or what levels you got them at, same with feats but that is less of a problem.
Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Originally made it with the Wizards character builder so if further explanation of the numbers is needed, let me know. Yes we need you to actually fill everything out. &nbsp;"I built it on the builder" is not a substitute. Sorry I did not mean to imply that I didn't put everything on the sheet. &nbsp;Just said if their needed to be discussion about it I would be more then happy to go over it. I did not take it as something you were implying. &nbsp;You are missing a good bit of things on the sheet. I'll try and treat this like a sheet as if it had things properly filled out. Your array isn't listed Your level up bonuses are not listed Your armor is unequipped and you seem to show an enhancement bonus of 5 for some reason. your neck is not equipped, or you put all the numbers in the wrong column How you spent your money is not listed (And when I spent your money I did not come up with the same numbers) Your armor is listed as 'drakescale' &nbsp;which is not available at +1 enhancement You did not list what benefit you get form your background You did not label where your powers are from or what levels you got them at, same with feats but that is less of a problem. I apologize I had linked an older sheet that wasn't updated, and I also assumed some things were implied. &nbsp;I have fixed that. 1. Array is listed under other items now. 2. I am unsure what you mean by level up bonuses. 3. Armor has been fixed, was having some issues getting it to take the math. 4. Neck is fixed. 5. Items are listed with price. 6. Drakescale armor was a typo, sorry. 7. Background benefit is listed. 8. Powers and feats, sources and levels are listed. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784</a>
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Gary M said: T said: Gary M said: T said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123944" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123944</a> Welcome to the Guild Living. &nbsp;I would like for you to take a minute and check the New Player Checklist again. &nbsp;There are a lot of basic things that are missing from this entry. &nbsp;If you don't know how to do something, it is ok to read up and give it your best shot, but we need to see where you are getting numbers from. You need to put your array, racials and level bumps somewhere easy to see (the video shows you where to put them) Your attack and damage workspace need to be filled out You have a cloak, but no enhancement bonus listed (I assume it is +1). &nbsp;Please write out on your sheet what enhancement bonus your cloak is and put that number in the Enh column for your non-armor defenses. You are wearing non-magic leather as a class who can wear chain and hide and also magic armor is one of the three 'must purchase' items. &nbsp;Please refer to the New Player Checklist. Label your powers as described in the video, also I don't see your Kalashtar racial power listed. Resonating Covenant gives you a feat bonus to attack rolls that will not stack with the feat bonus to attack rolls you get from Staff Expertise. &nbsp;I do not normally offer feedback on taking legal feats, however this feat literally does nothing for you. Avandra's Covenant as a feat is not a legal feat. &nbsp;In order to take that feat you have to worship Avandra and you worship Corellon. You selected the Devil's Pawn theme but did not list what you get from that theme in the powers section or in your features section. Where did you get those languages from? &nbsp;Kalashtar get common and Telepathy only. Your surges per day are incorrect Thusfar you do not have either a backstory or a mechanical background picked. &nbsp;While the mechanical background can be skipped, you do need to flesh out your character a little bit. &nbsp;Who is he? &nbsp;Where is he from? &nbsp;What is he like? Placed all necessary stats in the video's suggested area Filled out attack and damage spaces Changed Cloak to Amulet of Elegy and added enhancements Purchased Hide Bloodcut Armor Labelled powers as described in video Removed Resounding Covenant and added Group Mindlink Changed worshiped deity to Avandra (forgot to change on the top originally due to changing many times) Added Devil's Pawn Feats and Powers Languages corrected, elven added to languages through background Corrected Surges Added mechanical backstory and added flavor to character's history. Also, started from ground up so link is different. CORRECT LINK HERE: <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468</a> Your stats do not line up. &nbsp;For example your Wisdom is 19. &nbsp;Your highest stat on your array is 16 and you gave your level 4 bump to Con/Int. &nbsp;While it is a better idea to give your level 4 stat bump to your attack stat (wisdom) it does not look like that is what you did on your sheet. &nbsp;Take a minute and make sure the stats you have for your array match your stats for your character. Your attack workspace appears to be done correctly, however you only added +1 for enhancement on your damage workspace for some reason. &nbsp;You get full enhancement bonus to both attack and damage with those powers. &nbsp;Also, when selecting what to use as your two powers, you should pick things that are different. &nbsp;For you that should be Hand of Radiance and Melee Basic Attack. Check You are welcome to wear Hide, keep in mind your AC will be lagging behind a normal invoker for your level as you are able to take Chain but choosing not to. &nbsp;If you find that you are being mangled by combat you might want to look into getting heavier armor at a later date. &nbsp;It won't make a huge difference at +1 (Hide: 3(armor) + 2 (int) = +5, Chain: +6) it will start to increase as you continue to level up (+2 Hide offers 5 still, while Chain increases to 7). &nbsp;Again, not a huge deal but something to consider. Excellent Check Check Check When your background says "Perception added to class skill list" it means it adds it as an option, but does not provide training. &nbsp;As an invoker you get Religion +3 skills of your choice. &nbsp;Perception is not normally an option to take for one of those choices, but since your background allows it to be one, you can use one of your 3 trained skills on Perception. &nbsp;So you should end up with 4 trained skills and not 5. Check Looks good While it is not at all required, I would highly recommend checking out the guild New Items For Sale thread. &nbsp;Your weapon doesn't really do anything for you, but something like a Flaming Weapon would be really appropriate for your character and there is a +2 Flaming Weapon (Which you can make a staff) currently for sale that is less money than what you are currently spending on your weapon and will have a greater impact on your character. &nbsp;I wanted to make sure you knew you had access to items in that thread for your character and that the normal 'can only buy level 7 or lower' does not apply when you purchase items from guild mates. Almost there, fix those things and get back to me. Fixed Stats to reflect accurate boosts with levels Corrected Attack Workspace and added Melee Basic as one of the Attacks Changed Bloodcut armor to Chain Armor of Adaptability +1 Corrected trained skills to have 4 trained instead of 5 Currently waiting to see if I receive the weapon you suggested. EDIT: Purchased Flaming Weapon +2 and replaced Staff of Knives <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468</a>
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977" rel="nofollow">http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977</a>
Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores.
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Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace.
Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you.
Thomas A. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977" rel="nofollow">http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977</a> Hi Thomas A, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) Please move to the front page (for example under condition modifiers) your chosen array, where your racial bonuses and your level 4 boost to the ability scores went. 2) The enhancement bonus to AC I do not understand, and consequently I think it is likely wrong. 3) Your attack workspace is missing the feat bonus. Please give your character some flesh on these mechanical bones. A description, some personality and traits would go a long way. If you want to chat about D&D, ask questions about the campaign or any other thing, please contact one of the DMs to be added to the Guild Skype chat. My handle is baldhermit.
Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Originally made it with the Wizards character builder so if further explanation of the numbers is needed, let me know. Yes we need you to actually fill everything out. &nbsp;"I built it on the builder" is not a substitute. Sorry I did not mean to imply that I didn't put everything on the sheet. &nbsp;Just said if their needed to be discussion about it I would be more then happy to go over it. I did not take it as something you were implying. &nbsp;You are missing a good bit of things on the sheet. I'll try and treat this like a sheet as if it had things properly filled out. Your array isn't listed Your level up bonuses are not listed Your armor is unequipped and you seem to show an enhancement bonus of 5 for some reason. your neck is not equipped, or you put all the numbers in the wrong column How you spent your money is not listed (And when I spent your money I did not come up with the same numbers) Your armor is listed as 'drakescale' &nbsp;which is not available at +1 enhancement You did not list what benefit you get form your background You did not label where your powers are from or what levels you got them at, same with feats but that is less of a problem. I apologize I had linked an older sheet that wasn't updated, and I also assumed some things were implied. &nbsp;I have fixed that. 1. Array is listed under other items now. 2. I am unsure what you mean by level up bonuses. 3. Armor has been fixed, was having some issues getting it to take the math. 4. Neck is fixed. 5. Items are listed with price. 6. Drakescale armor was a typo, sorry. 7. Background benefit is listed. 8. Powers and feats, sources and levels are listed. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784</a> It might really help for you to watch the video. Weird place to put it, but ok. I'm going to copy-paste from the Checklist: Once you choose an array please put it somewhere on your sheet along with your bonuses from race and level . These numbers are before racial modifiers and are not in order. You want to put the highest number in your primary statistic and the secondary number in your secondary statistic. So if you are a Dragon Sorcerer you want your two highest statistics in Strength and Charisma. Read your class if you are confused. This campaign starts at lvl 5, so you should add the +1 to two different ability scores that you would have received at lvl 4. Please put these in somewhere, preferably in the correct spot. The reason you have having an issue getting it to 'take the math; is because you are not putting the math in correctly. &nbsp;It is the reason that we make such a point of you making characters correctly on mythweavers instead of putting them in the builder and hoping things turn out well. &nbsp;In this case the problem you are having is because Scale gives you +7 armor bonus and enhancement of 1. Check Your math still doesn't add up. &nbsp;Although I think I found the problem. &nbsp;You have marked that you have 2 potions of Cure Light, but only paid for 1. Check, except for the armor not being displayed correctly Check Check Fix your array, your armor and gold and you are going to be good to go.
T said: Gary M said: T said: Gary M said: T said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123944" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123944</a> Welcome to the Guild Living. &nbsp;I would like for you to take a minute and check the New Player Checklist again. &nbsp;There are a lot of basic things that are missing from this entry. &nbsp;If you don't know how to do something, it is ok to read up and give it your best shot, but we need to see where you are getting numbers from. You need to put your array, racials and level bumps somewhere easy to see (the video shows you where to put them) Your attack and damage workspace need to be filled out You have a cloak, but no enhancement bonus listed (I assume it is +1). &nbsp;Please write out on your sheet what enhancement bonus your cloak is and put that number in the Enh column for your non-armor defenses. You are wearing non-magic leather as a class who can wear chain and hide and also magic armor is one of the three 'must purchase' items. &nbsp;Please refer to the New Player Checklist. Label your powers as described in the video, also I don't see your Kalashtar racial power listed. Resonating Covenant gives you a feat bonus to attack rolls that will not stack with the feat bonus to attack rolls you get from Staff Expertise. &nbsp;I do not normally offer feedback on taking legal feats, however this feat literally does nothing for you. Avandra's Covenant as a feat is not a legal feat. &nbsp;In order to take that feat you have to worship Avandra and you worship Corellon. You selected the Devil's Pawn theme but did not list what you get from that theme in the powers section or in your features section. Where did you get those languages from? &nbsp;Kalashtar get common and Telepathy only. Your surges per day are incorrect Thusfar you do not have either a backstory or a mechanical background picked. &nbsp;While the mechanical background can be skipped, you do need to flesh out your character a little bit. &nbsp;Who is he? &nbsp;Where is he from? &nbsp;What is he like? Placed all necessary stats in the video's suggested area Filled out attack and damage spaces Changed Cloak to Amulet of Elegy and added enhancements Purchased Hide Bloodcut Armor Labelled powers as described in video Removed Resounding Covenant and added Group Mindlink Changed worshiped deity to Avandra (forgot to change on the top originally due to changing many times) Added Devil's Pawn Feats and Powers Languages corrected, elven added to languages through background Corrected Surges Added mechanical backstory and added flavor to character's history. Also, started from ground up so link is different. CORRECT LINK HERE: <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468</a> Your stats do not line up. &nbsp;For example your Wisdom is 19. &nbsp;Your highest stat on your array is 16 and you gave your level 4 bump to Con/Int. &nbsp;While it is a better idea to give your level 4 stat bump to your attack stat (wisdom) it does not look like that is what you did on your sheet. &nbsp;Take a minute and make sure the stats you have for your array match your stats for your character. Your attack workspace appears to be done correctly, however you only added +1 for enhancement on your damage workspace for some reason. &nbsp;You get full enhancement bonus to both attack and damage with those powers. &nbsp;Also, when selecting what to use as your two powers, you should pick things that are different. &nbsp;For you that should be Hand of Radiance and Melee Basic Attack. Check You are welcome to wear Hide, keep in mind your AC will be lagging behind a normal invoker for your level as you are able to take Chain but choosing not to. &nbsp;If you find that you are being mangled by combat you might want to look into getting heavier armor at a later date. &nbsp;It won't make a huge difference at +1 (Hide: 3(armor) + 2 (int) = +5, Chain: +6) it will start to increase as you continue to level up (+2 Hide offers 5 still, while Chain increases to 7). &nbsp;Again, not a huge deal but something to consider. Excellent Check Check Check When your background says "Perception added to class skill list" it means it adds it as an option, but does not provide training. &nbsp;As an invoker you get Religion +3 skills of your choice. &nbsp;Perception is not normally an option to take for one of those choices, but since your background allows it to be one, you can use one of your 3 trained skills on Perception. &nbsp;So you should end up with 4 trained skills and not 5. Check Looks good While it is not at all required, I would highly recommend checking out the guild New Items For Sale thread. &nbsp;Your weapon doesn't really do anything for you, but something like a Flaming Weapon would be really appropriate for your character and there is a +2 Flaming Weapon (Which you can make a staff) currently for sale that is less money than what you are currently spending on your weapon and will have a greater impact on your character. &nbsp;I wanted to make sure you knew you had access to items in that thread for your character and that the normal 'can only buy level 7 or lower' does not apply when you purchase items from guild mates. Almost there, fix those things and get back to me. Fixed Stats to reflect accurate boosts with levels Corrected Attack Workspace and added Melee Basic as one of the Attacks Changed Bloodcut armor to Chain Armor of Adaptability +1 Corrected trained skills to have 4 trained instead of 5 Currently waiting to see if I receive the weapon you suggested. EDIT: Purchased Flaming Weapon +2 and replaced Staff of Knives <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124468</a> Check Check Check Check You can go ahead and add in your Flaming Weapon. &nbsp;It is yours. You actually don't need to pay for a generic weapon/armor to enchant. &nbsp;When you purchase a magical X the mundane cost of the item is ignored. Everything looks pretty solid, so I'm going to toss you a journal. &nbsp;Log in and start working on your macros. &nbsp;When you get done either PM a DM or, preferably, say something on the guild Skype chat about needing your macros checked.
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Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 9. That is still not how magic armour works. For a more detailed explanation, please read pages 212-214 and 224-227 of the Player's Handbook. Additionally, I would recommend watching the character creation video guide in full length:&nbsp; <a href="https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ</a> 11. Ok.
baldhermit said: Thomas A. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977" rel="nofollow">http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977</a> Hi Thomas A, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) Please move to the front page (for example under condition modifiers) your chosen array, where your racial bonuses and your level 4 boost to the ability scores went. 2) The enhancement bonus to AC I do not understand, and consequently I think it is likely wrong. 3) Your attack workspace is missing the feat bonus. Please give your character some flesh on these mechanical bones. A description, some personality and traits would go a long way. If you want to chat about D&D, ask questions about the campaign or any other thing, please contact one of the DMs to be added to the Guild Skype chat. My handle is baldhermit. 1) Starting array, racial bonus, and level 4 increase now under condition modifiers 2) AC enhancement fixed (originally had +2 from lvl 7 armor then switched to lower version so I could get a horned helm and forgot to update, thanks for catching that) 3) Feat bonus added, thanks again for catching that Backstory , personality traits and mannerisms added. will ask to get added to skype group
Thomas A. said: baldhermit said: Thomas A. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977" rel="nofollow">http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1124977</a> Hi Thomas A, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) Please move to the front page (for example under condition modifiers) your chosen array, where your racial bonuses and your level 4 boost to the ability scores went. 2) The enhancement bonus to AC I do not understand, and consequently I think it is likely wrong. 3) Your attack workspace is missing the feat bonus. Please give your character some flesh on these mechanical bones. A description, some personality and traits would go a long way. If you want to chat about D&D, ask questions about the campaign or any other thing, please contact one of the DMs to be added to the Guild Skype chat. My handle is baldhermit. 1) Starting array, racial bonus, and level 4 increase now under condition modifiers 2) AC enhancement fixed (originally had +2 from lvl 7 armor then switched to lower version so I could get a horned helm and forgot to update, thanks for catching that) 3) Feat bonus added, thanks again for catching that Backstory , personality traits and mannerisms added. will ask to get added to skype group Hi Thomas. When you hit "Join Game" you will find a journal to fill out in the top right corner. If you have any questions, I suggest you ask them in the Skype chat. That is also the best place to let a DM know you're done with the macros. best of luck.
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812</a>&nbsp;
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Feyn said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812</a> First off, this appears to be based off an old build that is now outdated and fairly sub-optimal. I don't really recommend using this build, and you may suffer lack of fun during play, but up to you. Your stat array is painful but legal.&nbsp; 1. Take Flail Expertise instead of Weapon Expertise(Flail).(It wasn't out when the build you used was created.) 2. Your armor of faith bonus should be listed as a class bonus. 3. Tracking Dust is useless to you as your perception bonus is already higher than what the dust grants. 4. Cultist is... an odd theme but I suppose it is legal. As something that appears to be based of a crit fisher build perhaps you were looking for occultist? 5. List your theme and benefits under class features. 6. You do not appear to have picked a mechanical background: while not necessary it is recommended. In addition, your non-mechanical background is creepy as fuck(which is not a relevant thing but I felt the need to mention it). I guess I'll just say again I don't really recommend playing this build, and I doubt you or the rest of your party will enjoy it, but that's up to you. If you would like help refining this build into something more playable, or otherwise wish for character building assistance we are here to help.
Blooper said: Feyn said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812</a> First off, this appears to be based off an old build that is now outdated and fairly sub-optimal. I don't really recommend using this build, and you may suffer lack of fun during play, but up to you. Your stat array is painful but legal.&nbsp; 1. Take Flail Expertise instead of Weapon Expertise(Flail).(It wasn't out when the build you used was created.) 2. Your armor of faith bonus should be listed as a class bonus. 3. Tracking Dust is useless to you as your perception bonus is already higher than what the dust grants. 4. Cultist is... an odd theme but I suppose it is legal. As something that appears to be based of a crit fisher build perhaps you were looking for occultist? 5. List your theme and benefits under class features. 6. You do not appear to have picked a mechanical background: while not necessary it is recommended. In addition, your non-mechanical background is creepy as fuck(which is not a relevant thing but I felt the need to mention it). I guess I'll just say again I don't really recommend playing this build, and I doubt you or the rest of your party will enjoy it, but that's up to you. If you would like help refining this build into something more playable, or otherwise wish for character building assistance we are here to help. I'm new to this system so I'm &nbsp;defninatley going to take your advice and not play this build, I'll go back and remake an avenger from scratch and &nbsp;repost when it's complete.
Feyn said: Blooper said: Feyn said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123812</a> First off, this appears to be based off an old build that is now outdated and fairly sub-optimal. I don't really recommend using this build, and you may suffer lack of fun during play, but up to you. Your stat array is painful but legal.&nbsp; 1. Take Flail Expertise instead of Weapon Expertise(Flail).(It wasn't out when the build you used was created.) 2. Your armor of faith bonus should be listed as a class bonus. 3. Tracking Dust is useless to you as your perception bonus is already higher than what the dust grants. 4. Cultist is... an odd theme but I suppose it is legal. As something that appears to be based of a crit fisher build perhaps you were looking for occultist? 5. List your theme and benefits under class features. 6. You do not appear to have picked a mechanical background: while not necessary it is recommended. In addition, your non-mechanical background is creepy as fuck(which is not a relevant thing but I felt the need to mention it). I guess I'll just say again I don't really recommend playing this build, and I doubt you or the rest of your party will enjoy it, but that's up to you. If you would like help refining this build into something more playable, or otherwise wish for character building assistance we are here to help. I'm new to this system so I'm &nbsp;defninatley going to take your advice and not play this build, I'll go back and remake an avenger from scratch and &nbsp;repost when it's complete. By all means join guild chat and use it for brainstorming and ideas. &nbsp;If you dont have a contact among the DMs, send me one on skype at Gravymattingly.
Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 9. That is still not how magic armour works. For a more detailed explanation, please read pages 212-214 and 224-227 of the Player's Handbook. Additionally, I would recommend watching the character creation video guide in full length:&nbsp; <a href="https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ</a> 11. Ok. 9. Corrected AC bonuses.
Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 9. That is still not how magic armour works. For a more detailed explanation, please read pages 212-214 and 224-227 of the Player's Handbook. Additionally, I would recommend watching the character creation video guide in full length:&nbsp; <a href="https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ</a> 11. Ok. 9. Corrected AC bonuses. 12. Sword Burst is not an encounter power, contrary to what your sheet says. 13. You're missing racial bonuses to skill checks. 14. You should put actual numbers into the quick lookup. 15. You do not, to my knowledge, have proficiency in bastard swords. Unless you take a feat that gives you proficiency with it, you can't use that weapon. 16. Blade burst is not the name of a real power.
Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Originally made it with the Wizards character builder so if further explanation of the numbers is needed, let me know. Yes we need you to actually fill everything out. &nbsp;"I built it on the builder" is not a substitute. Sorry I did not mean to imply that I didn't put everything on the sheet. &nbsp;Just said if their needed to be discussion about it I would be more then happy to go over it. I did not take it as something you were implying. &nbsp;You are missing a good bit of things on the sheet. I'll try and treat this like a sheet as if it had things properly filled out. Your array isn't listed Your level up bonuses are not listed Your armor is unequipped and you seem to show an enhancement bonus of 5 for some reason. your neck is not equipped, or you put all the numbers in the wrong column How you spent your money is not listed (And when I spent your money I did not come up with the same numbers) Your armor is listed as 'drakescale' &nbsp;which is not available at +1 enhancement You did not list what benefit you get form your background You did not label where your powers are from or what levels you got them at, same with feats but that is less of a problem. I apologize I had linked an older sheet that wasn't updated, and I also assumed some things were implied. &nbsp;I have fixed that. 1. Array is listed under other items now. 2. I am unsure what you mean by level up bonuses. 3. Armor has been fixed, was having some issues getting it to take the math. 4. Neck is fixed. 5. Items are listed with price. 6. Drakescale armor was a typo, sorry. 7. Background benefit is listed. 8. Powers and feats, sources and levels are listed. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784</a> It might really help for you to watch the video. Weird place to put it, but ok. I'm going to copy-paste from the Checklist: Once you choose an array please put it somewhere on your sheet along with your bonuses from race and level . These numbers are before racial modifiers and are not in order. You want to put the highest number in your primary statistic and the secondary number in your secondary statistic. So if you are a Dragon Sorcerer you want your two highest statistics in Strength and Charisma. Read your class if you are confused. This campaign starts at lvl 5, so you should add the +1 to two different ability scores that you would have received at lvl 4. Please put these in somewhere, preferably in the correct spot. The reason you have having an issue getting it to 'take the math; is because you are not putting the math in correctly. &nbsp;It is the reason that we make such a point of you making characters correctly on mythweavers instead of putting them in the builder and hoping things turn out well. &nbsp;In this case the problem you are having is because Scale gives you +7 armor bonus and enhancement of 1. Check Your math still doesn't add up. &nbsp;Although I think I found the problem. &nbsp;You have marked that you have 2 potions of Cure Light, but only paid for 1. Check, except for the armor not being displayed correctly Check Check Fix your array, your armor and gold and you are going to be good to go. Done. &nbsp;Unimpressed with the tone of the responses.
Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was&nbsp;16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13.&nbsp; 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 9. That is still not how magic armour works. For a more detailed explanation, please read pages 212-214 and 224-227 of the Player's Handbook. Additionally, I would recommend watching the character creation video guide in full length:&nbsp; <a href="https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ</a> 11. Ok. 9. Corrected AC bonuses. 12. Sword Burst is not an encounter power, contrary to what your sheet says. 13. You're missing racial bonuses to skill checks. 14. You should put actual numbers into the quick lookup. 15. You do not, to my knowledge, have proficiency in bastard swords. Unless you take a feat that gives you proficiency with it, you can't use that weapon. 16. Blade burst is not the name of a real power. 12. Replaced Sword Burst for Flame Cyclone 13. Added in racial bonuses to skill checks. 14. Not sure what you meant, so I numbered each power, and also added in my ability score for each. 15. Changed the Bastard sword to a Luckblade Longsword 16. Got rid of Blade Burst.
Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Gary M said: Eric Z. said: Originally made it with the Wizards character builder so if further explanation of the numbers is needed, let me know. Yes we need you to actually fill everything out. &nbsp;"I built it on the builder" is not a substitute. Sorry I did not mean to imply that I didn't put everything on the sheet. &nbsp;Just said if their needed to be discussion about it I would be more then happy to go over it. I did not take it as something you were implying. &nbsp;You are missing a good bit of things on the sheet. I'll try and treat this like a sheet as if it had things properly filled out. Your array isn't listed Your level up bonuses are not listed Your armor is unequipped and you seem to show an enhancement bonus of 5 for some reason. your neck is not equipped, or you put all the numbers in the wrong column How you spent your money is not listed (And when I spent your money I did not come up with the same numbers) Your armor is listed as 'drakescale' &nbsp;which is not available at +1 enhancement You did not list what benefit you get form your background You did not label where your powers are from or what levels you got them at, same with feats but that is less of a problem. I apologize I had linked an older sheet that wasn't updated, and I also assumed some things were implied. &nbsp;I have fixed that. 1. Array is listed under other items now. 2. I am unsure what you mean by level up bonuses. 3. Armor has been fixed, was having some issues getting it to take the math. 4. Neck is fixed. 5. Items are listed with price. 6. Drakescale armor was a typo, sorry. 7. Background benefit is listed. 8. Powers and feats, sources and levels are listed. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=621784</a> It might really help for you to watch the video. Weird place to put it, but ok. I'm going to copy-paste from the Checklist: Once you choose an array please put it somewhere on your sheet along with your bonuses from race and level . These numbers are before racial modifiers and are not in order. You want to put the highest number in your primary statistic and the secondary number in your secondary statistic. So if you are a Dragon Sorcerer you want your two highest statistics in Strength and Charisma. Read your class if you are confused. This campaign starts at lvl 5, so you should add the +1 to two different ability scores that you would have received at lvl 4. Please put these in somewhere, preferably in the correct spot. The reason you have having an issue getting it to 'take the math; is because you are not putting the math in correctly. &nbsp;It is the reason that we make such a point of you making characters correctly on mythweavers instead of putting them in the builder and hoping things turn out well. &nbsp;In this case the problem you are having is because Scale gives you +7 armor bonus and enhancement of 1. Check Your math still doesn't add up. &nbsp;Although I think I found the problem. &nbsp;You have marked that you have 2 potions of Cure Light, but only paid for 1. Check, except for the armor not being displayed correctly Check Check Fix your array, your armor and gold and you are going to be good to go. Done. &nbsp;Unimpressed with the tone of the responses. If you think I was not being friendly enough, I sincerely apologize for being terse with you. &nbsp;I realize you were someone that used to play with us and I realize the process of making a character takes a little time. That being said, you actually do need to fill stuff out and things were done incorrectly. &nbsp;We state in the rules that we prefer people don't build their characters on the builder for the exact reason that they might not really understand where the numbers are coming from and just fill in things to make it match what the output of the builder was rather than understanding it. &nbsp;You tried to be lazy/ignore/didn't read that part/didn't see that part. We have spent a lot of time, energy and effort on streamlining the process. &nbsp;For those people that are new I have a ton of tolerance and patience for as they are learning something new. &nbsp;You knew what to do, but just didn't want to or thought you didn't need to do it in order to return. Some of your stuff was wrong, some mislabeled, some was made hard for me to check due to it not being formatted in an easy to read way. &nbsp;If you dislike my tone because your laziness is making my role of checking these character sheets harder then that means my distaste for your actions is properly being conveyed. The next step of character creation is macros. &nbsp;If you want to keep the chip on your shoulder and expect us to check off your half-built macros because you were here before, but want to ignore all the resources we have given you to fill out the sheet, please leave the campaign now. &nbsp;Otherwise, your journal entry is waiting for you when you log in.
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Quentin R. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126112" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126112</a> Hey Q. You left Class blank, might want to put warlock in there. In your conditionals you might want to note that you can't benefit from Cloak of Distortion and Armor of Dark Majesty at the same time. &nbsp;They both provide item bonuses and thus do not stack. You have Genasi listed in your race features as +1 Ref /Will. &nbsp;That is from your class not your race. Make your attack and damage workspace different things. For example you should likely make one of them MBA The things you need to do are minor and everything looks pretty close to correct. &nbsp;I'm going to toss you a journal entry.
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642</a> Here's a token for him as&nbsp;well.
David L. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642</a> Here's a token for him as&nbsp;well. Hey David. &nbsp;Welcome. Badge of the Berserker needs its enhancement bonus labeled Bestial Armor needs to be labeled as what type it is. &nbsp;I assume it is Hide. &nbsp;if it is Hide, you need to put a -1 in the armor check penalty area so your skills that can have armor check penalty are appropriately calculated (Endurance, Athletics etc). &nbsp;Currently with a '1' in there the armor is boosting those skills instead of penalizing them. I would make a note of which powers you can rampage from when you make your macros. &nbsp;While this is not something that needs to be denoted on the sheet, it is commonly forgotten so I wanted to bring to your attention the fact that Rampage is limited to critical hits with Barbarian powers only. Excellent job. &nbsp;Fix those two things, repost and I'll toss a journal entry your way.
The Mad said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126955" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126955</a> Please repost when you finish filling out the sheet. &nbsp;I can't respond to it until it is all filled out and I don't want it to get lost in the wash of new PCs and responses.
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642</a>... Here's a token for him as well.
David L. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1123642</a>... Here's a token for him as well. Approved, journal waiting you.
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Adun Sindar said: Gary M said: Adun Sindar said: Third PC I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1122160" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1122160</a> Hey Adun. &nbsp;Welcome to the paragon crew. Polearm Momentum requires Dex 15 AND Wis 15, not either. I think this might torpedo what you are going for out of the gate, so lets get that out of the way first. You spent all your money on Gauntlets of the Ram. &nbsp;The reason the rule exists where you can't buy a level 8 item is actually specifically so you aren't mostly naked with a really nice pair of gloves. (Check the restrictions on starting items on the New Player Checklist) Might just be blind, but what is your mechanical background? So... I feel like changing the first two might cause a ton of trickle-down changes and I'll have to redo the review anyway, so just repost when you fix these. FIXED 1. Changed my stat array to account for Polearm Momentum in the future. Its a tight fit, I just don't get to pad CON as I would have liked. Tending Strike At-Will&nbsp;changed to Grasping Tide. Took Melee Training (Wisdom) to buff my MBA, planning to take Polearm Momentum at a later level. 2. Bought a +1 Neck, +1 Weapon/Implement, and a +2 Armor. 3. Dalelands mechanical background text has now been added to page 1. Well, I don't see anything else wrong. Journal added.
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The Mad said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126955" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1126955</a> As I said in Guild Chat on Skype. &nbsp;You need to completely fill out your character sheet. &nbsp;Step 10 in the New Player Checklist goes into exhaustive detail explaining what all needs to be filled out. &nbsp;Check it and repost.
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Maxwell B. said: 14. Alright, this time I think I got it. Looks good. However, roll20 is dying right now, so I unfortunately can't give you a journal immediately. I will PM you over skype when your journal is made so you can start working on macros then.
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well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a>
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Liviu S. said: well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a> Hi Drake, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. First thing I noticed is that you are allowed to have one stat drop as low as 8. So you can have a slightly higher stat in some other ability if you choose. Generally I would suggest you build your character to be good at one or a few things, and let others be good at the things you will never be really good at. Boost your main attack stat(s) at any chance you get, and let your dump stat be. 1) The AC calculation. The total number may well be right, but the enhancement bonus should be in the right box, and I question why your shield bonus would be +3 (heavy tends to give +2) and I am not aware of a check penalty that comes with scale armor. 2) Your HP is incorrect, too low. 3) You attack calculation for Blessing of Law is missing a number of elements you did include in your MBA calculation. Why is this? 4) Your damage calculation is incomplete. Please go through the boxes and see if they apply to your character 5) Please modify "Elemental Priest" under class/path/destiny features by the word 'Theme' so we know what you mean there. Also please include relevant Class features, such as which Domain you picked, that you can use a Channel Divinity once per encounter, etc 6) Powers: please list usage. It is important to know Blessing of Law is an at-will, and Ringing Blow an encounter power, just as Cure Light Wounds, while a daily Utility power is not a class power. 7) while not mandatory, I do not think you choose the mechanically benefit of a background. I think you are already part of the Skype Guild chat, but if not, please contact one of the DMs to be included. There you can ask questions and generally chat about D&D, upcoming games, character features, etc
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baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a> Hi Drake, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. First thing I noticed is that you are allowed to have one stat drop as low as 8. So you can have a slightly higher stat in some other ability if you choose. Generally I would suggest you build your character to be good at one or a few things, and let others be good at the things you will never be really good at. Boost your main attack stat(s) at any chance you get, and let your dump stat be. 1) The AC calculation. The total number may well be right, but the enhancement bonus should be in the right box, and I question why your shield bonus would be +3 (heavy tends to give +2) and I am not aware of a check penalty that comes with scale armor. 2) Your HP is incorrect, too low. 3) You attack calculation for Blessing of Law is missing a number of elements you did include in your MBA calculation. Why is this? 4) Your damage calculation is incomplete. Please go through the boxes and see if they apply to your character 5) Please modify "Elemental Priest" under class/path/destiny features by the word 'Theme' so we know what you mean there. Also please include relevant Class features, such as which Domain you picked, that you can use a Channel Divinity once per encounter, etc 6) Powers: please list usage. It is important to know Blessing of Law is an at-will, and Ringing Blow an encounter power, just as Cure Light Wounds, while a daily Utility power is not a class power. 7) while not mandatory, I do not think you choose the mechanically benefit of a background. I think you are already part of the Skype Guild chat, but if not, please contact one of the DMs to be included. There you can ask questions and generally chat about D&D, upcoming games, character features, etc Shield gets +1 cause of the devout feat. And also shield gives -2 check penalties.....not the armor 12+con bonus 5 every level. 12+4=16 +20(excluding level 1 would be 5x4=20) =36 so i simply mistyped &nbsp;i guess. I didnt noticed my bad will correct tomorrow. All powers have full description of them insode their box. But &nbsp;i should resume the essential things in 2 rows &nbsp;i guess. Also i will check the spell...but if its 1(w) + wisdom isnt that 1d10+3? Hm shall check it out. Uh..damage is off? :s workspace or quickslots? Bastard have 1d10 + strength.....i guess i must add +1to damage too since its enhanced? Again on powers i added details about the spell turn undead...i guess the channele divinity details are not there. But my domain with his bonuses are there (torm domain...first power in list) Sorry will add usage. Oh yeah a background too...damn it forgot it. Also i tought the theme was the background....more or less. Yes &nbsp;i am part of the chat and got already lots of help. Tomorrow &nbsp;i will indeed modify my character sheet based on those suggestions and will recheck the details your observed. Thx for your time. Oh about the stats....dunno i always used to make a little more balanced players...guess &nbsp;i am not used to the high stats from start. Having int 8 for me is like being quite an idiot...which rp wise is quite a disadvantage but also quite bad cause you must role a stupid character instead of a simple.and normal one (for example)....maybe &nbsp;i just have to get used to having more higher stats...hm...
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738</a>
Liviu S. said: baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a> Hi Drake, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. First thing I noticed is that you are allowed to have one stat drop as low as 8. So you can have a slightly higher stat in some other ability if you choose. Generally I would suggest you build your character to be good at one or a few things, and let others be good at the things you will never be really good at. Boost your main attack stat(s) at any chance you get, and let your dump stat be. 1) The AC calculation. The total number may well be right, but the enhancement bonus should be in the right box, and I question why your shield bonus would be +3 (heavy tends to give +2) and I am not aware of a check penalty that comes with scale armor. 2) Your HP is incorrect, too low. 3) You attack calculation for Blessing of Law is missing a number of elements you did include in your MBA calculation. Why is this? 4) Your damage calculation is incomplete. Please go through the boxes and see if they apply to your character 5) Please modify "Elemental Priest" under class/path/destiny features by the word 'Theme' so we know what you mean there. Also please include relevant Class features, such as which Domain you picked, that you can use a Channel Divinity once per encounter, etc 6) Powers: please list usage. It is important to know Blessing of Law is an at-will, and Ringing Blow an encounter power, just as Cure Light Wounds, while a daily Utility power is not a class power. 7) while not mandatory, I do not think you choose the mechanically benefit of a background. I think you are already part of the Skype Guild chat, but if not, please contact one of the DMs to be included. There you can ask questions and generally chat about D&D, upcoming games, character features, etc Shield gets +1 cause of the devout feat. And also shield gives -2 check penalties.....not the armor 12+con bonus 5 every level. 12+4=16 +20(excluding level 1 would be 5x4=20) =36 so i simply mistyped &nbsp;i guess. I didnt noticed my bad will correct tomorrow. All powers have full description of them insode their box. But &nbsp;i should resume the essential things in 2 rows &nbsp;i guess. Also i will check the spell...but if its 1(w) + wisdom isnt that 1d10+3? Hm shall check it out. Uh..damage is off? :s workspace or quickslots? Bastard have 1d10 + strength.....i guess i must add +1to damage too since its enhanced? Again on powers i added details about the spell turn undead...i guess the channele divinity details are not there. But my domain with his bonuses are there (torm domain...first power in list) Sorry will add usage. Oh yeah a background too...damn it forgot it. Also i tought the theme was the background....more or less. Yes &nbsp;i am part of the chat and got already lots of help. Tomorrow &nbsp;i will indeed modify my character sheet based on those suggestions and will recheck the details your observed. Thx for your time. Oh about the stats....dunno i always used to make a little more balanced players...guess &nbsp;i am not used to the high stats from start. Having int 8 for me is like being quite an idiot...which rp wise is quite a disadvantage but also quite bad cause you must role a stupid character instead of a simple.and normal one (for example)....maybe &nbsp;i just have to get used to having more higher stats...hm... At 1: Devout Protector Expertise does NOT give you an additional shield bonus. I think you should read that feat again. At 2: Read again how to calculate your HP total At 3: Attack work space not fixed for Blessing of Law. Please do the math At 4: Also not addressed, please fix. At 5: Not addressed, please fix At 6: Not addressed, please fix At stats: You do not have to roleplay your stats. Better to have a character than can mechanically perform. Please repost when these issues have been addressed.
Bobert said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738</a> Hi Bobert, welcome to the Guild Living campaign 1) AC : from a quick guess I'd say you misplaced the enhancement of your armor 2) Fortitude, please explain where that 9 from ability comes from 3) mixing implement and weapon attacks, you might be better off with versatile expertise, or go a completely different route and include crossbow caster 4) enhancement bonus missing in the damage work space If you wish to ask questions about D&D 4e, the Guild, or generally chat, contact one of the DMs to be added to the Guild Skype chat. My handle is baldhermit
baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a> Hi Drake, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. First thing I noticed is that you are allowed to have one stat drop as low as 8. So you can have a slightly higher stat in some other ability if you choose. Generally I would suggest you build your character to be good at one or a few things, and let others be good at the things you will never be really good at. Boost your main attack stat(s) at any chance you get, and let your dump stat be. 1) The AC calculation. The total number may well be right, but the enhancement bonus should be in the right box, and I question why your shield bonus would be +3 (heavy tends to give +2) and I am not aware of a check penalty that comes with scale armor. 2) Your HP is incorrect, too low. 3) You attack calculation for Blessing of Law is missing a number of elements you did include in your MBA calculation. Why is this? 4) Your damage calculation is incomplete. Please go through the boxes and see if they apply to your character 5) Please modify "Elemental Priest" under class/path/destiny features by the word 'Theme' so we know what you mean there. Also please include relevant Class features, such as which Domain you picked, that you can use a Channel Divinity once per encounter, etc 6) Powers: please list usage. It is important to know Blessing of Law is an at-will, and Ringing Blow an encounter power, just as Cure Light Wounds, while a daily Utility power is not a class power. 7) while not mandatory, I do not think you choose the mechanically benefit of a background. I think you are already part of the Skype Guild chat, but if not, please contact one of the DMs to be included. There you can ask questions and generally chat about D&D, upcoming games, character features, etc Shield gets +1 cause of the devout feat. And also shield gives -2 check penalties.....not the armor 12+con bonus 5 every level. 12+4=16 +20(excluding level 1 would be 5x4=20) =36 so i simply mistyped &nbsp;i guess. I didnt noticed my bad will correct tomorrow. All powers have full description of them insode their box. But &nbsp;i should resume the essential things in 2 rows &nbsp;i guess. Also i will check the spell...but if its 1(w) + wisdom isnt that 1d10+3? Hm shall check it out. Uh..damage is off? :s workspace or quickslots? Bastard have 1d10 + strength.....i guess i must add +1to damage too since its enhanced? Again on powers i added details about the spell turn undead...i guess the channele divinity details are not there. But my domain with his bonuses are there (torm domain...first power in list) Sorry will add usage. Oh yeah a background too...damn it forgot it. Also i tought the theme was the background....more or less. Yes &nbsp;i am part of the chat and got already lots of help. Tomorrow &nbsp;i will indeed modify my character sheet based on those suggestions and will recheck the details your observed. Thx for your time. Oh about the stats....dunno i always used to make a little more balanced players...guess &nbsp;i am not used to the high stats from start. Having int 8 for me is like being quite an idiot...which rp wise is quite a disadvantage but also quite bad cause you must role a stupid character instead of a simple.and normal one (for example)....maybe &nbsp;i just have to get used to having more higher stats...hm... At 1: Devout Protector Expertise does NOT give you an additional shield bonus. I think you should read that feat again. At 2: Read again how to calculate your HP total At 3: Attack work space not fixed for Blessing of Law. Please do the math At 4: Also not addressed, please fix. At 5: Not addressed, please fix At 6: Not addressed, please fix At stats: You do not have to roleplay your stats. Better to have a character than can mechanically perform. Please repost when these issues have been addressed. The character sheet was updated. Please recheck once you have time.
Liviu S. said: baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: baldhermit said: Liviu S. said: well...here is my character sheet. I am not sure i did everything at 100% but i did my best! I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a> Hi Drake, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. First thing I noticed is that you are allowed to have one stat drop as low as 8. So you can have a slightly higher stat in some other ability if you choose. Generally I would suggest you build your character to be good at one or a few things, and let others be good at the things you will never be really good at. Boost your main attack stat(s) at any chance you get, and let your dump stat be. 1) The AC calculation. The total number may well be right, but the enhancement bonus should be in the right box, and I question why your shield bonus would be +3 (heavy tends to give +2) and I am not aware of a check penalty that comes with scale armor. 2) Your HP is incorrect, too low. 3) You attack calculation for Blessing of Law is missing a number of elements you did include in your MBA calculation. Why is this? 4) Your damage calculation is incomplete. Please go through the boxes and see if they apply to your character 5) Please modify "Elemental Priest" under class/path/destiny features by the word 'Theme' so we know what you mean there. Also please include relevant Class features, such as which Domain you picked, that you can use a Channel Divinity once per encounter, etc 6) Powers: please list usage. It is important to know Blessing of Law is an at-will, and Ringing Blow an encounter power, just as Cure Light Wounds, while a daily Utility power is not a class power. 7) while not mandatory, I do not think you choose the mechanically benefit of a background. I think you are already part of the Skype Guild chat, but if not, please contact one of the DMs to be included. There you can ask questions and generally chat about D&D, upcoming games, character features, etc Shield gets +1 cause of the devout feat. And also shield gives -2 check penalties.....not the armor 12+con bonus 5 every level. 12+4=16 +20(excluding level 1 would be 5x4=20) =36 so i simply mistyped &nbsp;i guess. I didnt noticed my bad will correct tomorrow. All powers have full description of them insode their box. But &nbsp;i should resume the essential things in 2 rows &nbsp;i guess. Also i will check the spell...but if its 1(w) + wisdom isnt that 1d10+3? Hm shall check it out. Uh..damage is off? :s workspace or quickslots? Bastard have 1d10 + strength.....i guess i must add +1to damage too since its enhanced? Again on powers i added details about the spell turn undead...i guess the channele divinity details are not there. But my domain with his bonuses are there (torm domain...first power in list) Sorry will add usage. Oh yeah a background too...damn it forgot it. Also i tought the theme was the background....more or less. Yes &nbsp;i am part of the chat and got already lots of help. Tomorrow &nbsp;i will indeed modify my character sheet based on those suggestions and will recheck the details your observed. Thx for your time. Oh about the stats....dunno i always used to make a little more balanced players...guess &nbsp;i am not used to the high stats from start. Having int 8 for me is like being quite an idiot...which rp wise is quite a disadvantage but also quite bad cause you must role a stupid character instead of a simple.and normal one (for example)....maybe &nbsp;i just have to get used to having more higher stats...hm... At 1: Devout Protector Expertise does NOT give you an additional shield bonus. I think you should read that feat again. At 2: Read again how to calculate your HP total At 3: Attack work space not fixed for Blessing of Law. Please do the math At 4: Also not addressed, please fix. At 5: Not addressed, please fix At 6: Not addressed, please fix At stats: You do not have to roleplay your stats. Better to have a character than can mechanically perform. Please repost when these issues have been addressed. The character sheet was updated. Please recheck once you have time. Hey Drake. &nbsp;Take a minute to glance at some of the other replies on this thread. &nbsp;While it may seem a little OCD to ask everyone to follow a specific format, responding to each point specifically makes it far easier for us to address issues that you have. &nbsp;Saying "I fixed it" or "Updated" makes it harder on us to respond to what else needs fixing. You do need to split up your bonus to armor. &nbsp;+1 Scale provides +7 AC from armor and +1Enh. &nbsp;So 7 in Armor bonus and 1 in Enh. Check Check Check Check Check I see the background but I don't see you select the background benefit. &nbsp;The easiest and most likely benefit for you to take from this is +2 Religion. &nbsp;Please denote that or one of the other benefits on your sheet. I don't see Spirit of Athas on your powers list
baldhermit said: Bobert said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1129738</a> Hi Bobert, welcome to the Guild Living campaign 1) AC : from a quick guess I'd say you misplaced the enhancement of your armor 2) Fortitude, please explain where that 9 from ability comes from 3) mixing implement and weapon attacks, you might be better off with versatile expertise, or go a completely different route and include crossbow caster 4) enhancement bonus missing in the damage work space If you wish to ask questions about D&D 4e, the Guild, or generally chat, contact one of the DMs to be added to the Guild Skype chat. My handle is baldhermit 1) fixed 2) was an error, now it is fixed 3) great idea thanks (fixed) 4) fixed ok I can do that later today thanks.
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Yes very sorry i was not sure if i had to post changes too or not...i will do it from now on. Now to see your points. i will try to confront only the ones that are not checked. Fixed...was a lil confused at first on that. Problem is that the background does not give me any bonus....in fact it only gives me a bonus skill list to choose from from what i read...but i might be wrong...if so please assist me on that one. Since it was a feat of the theme i put it in calss/path/destiny as well as smite undead and healing word.....i guess the ones from theme must be in power section? changed it anyway. Also thank you everyone for your patience and help in setting this first character...i know i am kind of a burden now but i will try to be less in the future. edit: sorry forgot the sheet link <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1128658</a>