Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Mashallah said: Maxwell B. said: Very first try, and excited to get some critiques. Been reading and watching the video, but there may be some things namely attack and damage workspaces. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1120338</a> 1. Please mark down your current exp. 2. Your attack and damage workspaces aren't filled out. If you need help with doing them, refer to pages 274-276 of the PHB. 3. Please mark down which proficiency you're acquiring through White Lotus Dueling Expertise. If you aren't interested in any, consider War Wizard's Expertise instead as a direct upgrade to it. 4. Please fill out your maximum number of surges. 5. It is strongly not recommended to start play without a magic weapon. Your character's agency in combat depends on whether you can hit, and magic weapons are a significant contributor to accuracy. 6. Please mark down your class features. 7. Please mark down your languages spoken. 8. It is strongly recommended that characters have a backstory and personality of some sort. If you have one, please mark it down on the sheet. If not, it is recommended that you come up with one so as to make your character more than just a stat stick. 9. What kind of armour are you using? To my knowledge there is none with an armour bonus of +1 in heroic tier, so that can't be correct. 10. Your ability scores seem to be incorrect. Your array has only one 10, which is presumably your Charisma. But then it's denoted that you applied a total of +3 to Dexterity and ended up with 13 Dexterity, which is a contradiction. Similarly, your sheet says you have only one 15, but your Intelligence implies a 15 before additions. Please write back once you fix all these. 1. The current Exp, I don't know how to fill, the video did not explain that part, I did however enter the level and it automatically filled in what it could. 2. Filled out Attack/Damage Workspaces. 3. Changed feat from White Lotus Dueling Expertise, to White Lotus Riposte, which does not have any optional proficiency. 4. Filled out number of maximum Surges. 5. Replaced original weapon with a magic one. 6. Marked down Class Features 7. Spoken Languages are under 'Known Languages'. 8. The basic of my Characters background, appearance, and attitude is filled in. I wish to slowly create him during games from the skeleton of sorts that I can work off of. 9. Now equipped Agile Resolve Vestments for armor. 10. The Array I used was 16/15/12/11/11/10. I also have a racial bonus with +2INT and +2DEX. With my abilities arranged like so: STR/CON/DEX/INT/WIS/CHA, I matched up my score like so: 11/12/11/16/15/10. Adding my racial bonus, my score for INT is 18, and my DEX is 13. 1. See page 29 of PHB. 2. They are incorrect. You should get proficiency bonus to attack on both your MBA and your greenflame blade. Intelligent blademaster lets you use INT for melee basic attacks, therefore you should mark down INT to attack and damage for melee basic attacks. I do not understand where are you getting feat bonuses. You should add enhancement bonuses to attack and damage. 3. White Lotus Riposte is not an Expertise feat and thus not a legal choice for your free Expertise feat. 4. Ok. 5. Ok, however you haven't adjusted numbers for it. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. Ok. 9. But what kind of armour is it? Cloth? Leather? Hide? Chain? Scale? Plate? None of those gives +1 armour bonus to AC, instead they are 0/2/3/6/7/8 respectively. 10. You get +1 to two ability scores of your choice at level 4. It is even written on your sheet: "Level 4: +1 Int/+1 Dex", so it surprises me that you missed that. Please write back after you correct these issues. 1. Filled in current EXP. 2. Adjusted the numbers, a little confused, but hopefully I got them right. 3. Changed to Weapon Expertise. 9. Cloth armor. Fixed the armor bonus. 10. Adjusted ability scores. 1. Ok. 2. Still incorrect. You have only +1 feat bonus to things, not +2, and Greenflame blade does get proficiency bonus. Moreover, I would recommend that, instead of your current arrangement of attack workspace arrangement, you do something that should meaningfully differ. Such as, Weapon powers and Implement powers. Weapon powers get proficiency bonus to attack, Implement powers don't. 3. Weapon expertise does not apply to your implement powers, such as Crackling burst. Therefore, I would strongly suggest considering my initial recommendation, which was War Wizard's Expertise. 9. You haven't fixed it. Cloth armor gives +0 armor bonus, not +2. Additionally, I can't see how would you afford both a Sustaining Cloak +2 and Agile Resolve Vestments +2. 10. Ok. 11. You do not have a source of feat bonus to damage, contrary to your damage workspace. 2. Alright, changed the arrangement. 3. Took your advice and switched to War Wizard's expertise. 9. Fixed the armor bonus. 11. Fixed the feat bonus in the damage workspace. P.S Thank you for being patient and helping so far. I have been getting detered somewhat because of the daunting task of creating the sheet. So again, thank you. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 9. That is still not how magic armour works. For a more detailed explanation, please read pages 212-214 and 224-227 of the Player's Handbook. Additionally, I would recommend watching the character creation video guide in full length: <a href="https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ" rel="nofollow">https://youtu.be/fAfAvjux-mQ</a> 11. Ok. 9. Corrected AC bonuses. 12. Sword Burst is not an encounter power, contrary to what your sheet says. 13. You're missing racial bonuses to skill checks. 14. You should put actual numbers into the quick lookup. 15. You do not, to my knowledge, have proficiency in bastard swords. Unless you take a feat that gives you proficiency with it, you can't use that weapon. 16. Blade burst is not the name of a real power. 12. Replaced Sword Burst for Flame Cyclone 13. Added in racial bonuses to skill checks. 14. Not sure what you meant, so I numbered each power, and also added in my ability score for each. 15. Changed the Bastard sword to a Luckblade Longsword 16. Got rid of Blade Burst.