Li said: Mashallah said: Li said: Mashallah said: Li said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136966" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136966</a> I've probably messed up a lot but oh well! Hope y'all can help! :D 1. As a Bladesinger, you use Intelligence rather than Strength for your Melee Basic Attack, thanks to the Instinctive Attack class feature. Please adjust your workspaces and quick lookup for that. 2. You do not need to have two different Expertise Feats to cover your different attacks, in case there is misunderstanding. You technically can, but there's not much reason to. I also don't see how are you getting a +2 feat bonus to attack on your melee basic attacks. I see only a source of +1 bonus on your sheet. Perhaps you thought that expertise feats stack, but bonuses of the same type never stack in D&D. 3. Have you bought all 3 of your items through the thread? The costs seem to suggest that, but that isn't marked down anywhere on your sheet. 4. As you have to select your prepared powers before adventures begin and without knowing what the adventure is about, your sheet has to have marked which powers you have prepared. Because of this, in Guild setting, it's generally recommended for wizards to ignore the spellbook feature. 5. You should have level 1 Daily Bladesinger powers selected. 6. Your level 5 Bladesinger powers are Daily, not Encounter. 7. Dazzling Sunray is not an attack against AC and doesn't have a damage roll. 8. Your Quick lookup should include a power with meaningfully different statistics from your Melee Basic, such as, say, Colour Spray. 9. You should mark down which kind of weapon are you using. Longsword? Rapier? Dagger? Shortsword? Something else? 10. You should mark down which kind of armor are you wearing. Cloth? Leather? Hide? 11. You should mark down the bonus to AC from Guarded Flourish. 12. The +1 bonus to AC from Shielding Blade doesn't stack with Guarded Flourish. Regardless, it shouldn't be put in the Shield Bonus field, as the sheet automatically applies that field to both AC and Reflex, while Shielding Blade provides only AC. Please reply once you have fixed these issues. 13. You should mark down theme features and powers. 1. Re-calculated using INT MOD! 2. Changed Expertise! 3. Added [Thread] next to the items in the Wealth box. 4. Condensed Powers. 5. What do you mean selected? I suppose it's not an issue now since 4.? 6. Noted as Daily. 7. Realised DazzSun is a selected passive. Changed to Colour Spray. 8. Changed. They're kinda the same tho, since same weapon/implement + Instinctive Atk feature. But one is vWIL one is vAC! :D 9. Marked. Rapier! 10. Marked. Leather! 11. Added. 12. Fixed. 13 Noted in Background and Powers sections. 1. Ok. 2. Ok. 3. Ok. 4. Ok. 5. I didn't previously notice charm of misplaced wrath. Looks fine now. 6. Ok. 7. Ok. 8. They are not the same. Colour Spray is not a weapon power and thus doesn't gain proficiency bonus. As such, the numbers you provided are incorrect. 9. Ok. 10. Ok. 11. Ok. 12. Ok. 13. Ok. There might be something else I'm missing, but I'm in a hurry right now. I'll give a more detailed lookover once I'm available again. 5. I swapped Enfeeblement out for Misplaced Wrath since you said I could choose from other Wizard Lv1s too. 8. Took out proficiency from Colour Spray calculation. Thanks for helping to review and correct this mess of a build! :D 1. Where did the enhancement bonus of your armour go? The last time I checked, it was denoted correctly. Now, there's a 0 instead. 2. Your Quick Lookup still incorrectly says Colour Spray has +12 to attack. 3. Additionally, Colour Spray does not have a damage die of 1d8. As these are reasonably minor errors, boop me on Skype once you're done and I'll create you a journal entry.