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baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451</a> Hi Matthew, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) for starters, please list your class as Rogue (Thief) to avoid confusion with another class, named Rogue (Scoundrel) 2) I do not know what short blade expertise is 3) your attack calculation seems incorrect, missing a feat bonus 4) your damage calculations are missing entirely 5) your defense calculations are missing the defense bonus from the enhancement of your neck item 6) Please tag your chosen powers correctly. The tricks are not features but utilities, Fleeting Ghost is a level 2 utility 7) udner quick lookup, please fill out the check penalty, leaving it blank makes us think you do not know. 8) what is the +3 misc. bonus to initiative based on? Hidden blade does not give you a +1 bonus to initiative 9) quick draw does not give you a +1 acrobatics, nor a +1 stealth Please double check that you are actually using the compendium that can be found on our forum, as it seems you may have based some of your choices on other data. Not mandatory, but we do allow allow our players to select a theme for their characters, which can give your character both flavor and power. Once you have had a chance to review above, please repost. In the mean time, if you wish to become part of Guild Skype chat, please contact one of the DMs to be added. My handle is baldhermit. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451</a> 1)Fixed 2)Was a typo. I meant Light Blade Expertise. Now fixed 3)Fixed 4)Pretty sure is Fixed 5)Fixed 6)Fixed 7)Fixed 8)Another typo. I meant to type Hidden Weapon not Hidden Blade, and the compendium says it's property give me&nbsp;an item bonus to initiative checks equal to the weapon's enhancement bonus. 9) I know I had a lot of typos apparently, but I swapped Quick Draw and Light Step's places. Quick Draw gives me +2 Init, and Light Step gives me +1 to Stealth and Acrobatics 10) I added the Black-Hearted Knave to my character sheet 1 : check 2 : check 3: check 4a) why did you select two weapon fighting, what two weapons do you plan to wield? This also will impact your damage calculation which I currently believe to be incorrect. 4b) The class damage bonus is not a feat bonus 5: check 6: sorta check, missed Unbalancing Trick 7: check 8: check 9 : check 10) You get a choice of one of the Thief U2's (like Fleeting Ghost) or the Black Hearted Knave U2. Not both. Please do not reply with "fixed", but rather state what you changed. That helps us understand what if anything you're doing incorrectly, and prevents us from having to check the entire sheet again, just in case you did not actually 'fix' it. 4a) I was planning on wielding both my +1 hidden shortsword along with a mundane shortsword. So would I just add it's damage a second time? I'm not sure quite how it works in 4e. 4b) Alright. I moved the +2 from my class damage bonus to the Misc. column. Is that right? 6) Changed Unbalancing Trick's tag to Utility 10) I removed Black-Hearted Knave's U2. I decided to keep Fleeting Ghost At 4a : read Two Weapon Fighting, please 4b : check 6 : check 10 : check 4a) I added +1 to the feat section of the damage work space for my basic melee attack. That how it works?
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Matthew D. said: baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: baldhermit said: Matthew D. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1136451</a> 4a) I added +1 to the feat section of the damage work space for my basic melee attack. That how it works? It is actually NOT a feat bonus, but close enough. You will find a journal for you to fill out in the top right corner after you hit Join Game.
I'd like to mulligan my alt, Andre Rasputin have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a>
Returning player here, decided to make new characters, and I have one here for ya lot&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009</a> An eladrin tactical presence lazylord.
Jay R. said: I'd like to mulligan my alt, Andre Rasputin have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> 1. I am slightly amused you calculated your hp in conditionals, got the wrong number, then put the right number in the hp section. 2. Where is your fifth trained skill from? 3. Please mark a shard slot in magic items and list your shard there.&nbsp;
Cliff B. said: Returning player here, decided to make new characters, and I have one here for ya lot&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009</a> An eladrin tactical presence lazylord. 1. Please list the ability array you chose and where you dedicated racial and level up boosts.(preferably in the statistics block section) 2. Please list theme abilities in the class/path/destiny features section. 3. Your hit points appear to be incorrect. You are likely attempting to add con mod rather than con score to starting hp. 4. You do not appear to be proficient in ring mail. This may not be a problem for you as a lazylord, though you have one power that relies on hitting. Either way you need to account for the appropriate penalties. I might suggest lead by example and another no attack roll required power such as vengeance as mine for your daily 1 and encounter 3 if you go that route. 5. If you do not choose to remove them, please use the attack workspace and quick lookup area to calculate the attack roll for one of your str attack powers and disciplined counter. 6. Please label what kind of shield you are using. It appears you are using a heavy shield, but that would provide no benefit as you are not proficient, as far as I can see. 7. Please include Fey Step and Disciplined Counter in powers. 8. You do not appear to have chosen a mechanical background: It is recommended, but not required, to do so.&nbsp; 9. Please have at least a cursory background written/thought up to give to other players during the intro section of an adventure.&nbsp;
Blooper said: Jay R. said: I'd like to mulligan my alt, Andre Rasputin have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> 1. I am slightly amused you calculated your hp in conditionals, got the wrong number, then put the right number in the hp section. 2. Where is your fifth trained skill from? 3. Please mark a shard slot in magic items and list your shard there.&nbsp; 1. I had changed my array and must have forgot to update the conditionals. &nbsp;I updated the conditionals to match the Total HP in the HP section.&nbsp; 2. An oversight, I removed one of them.&nbsp; 3. Added my shard under Shard -&nbsp;Siberys Shard of Merciless Cold +1.&nbsp;
Jay R. said: Blooper said: Jay R. said: I'd like to mulligan my alt, Andre Rasputin have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> 1. I am slightly amused you calculated your hp in conditionals, got the wrong number, then put the right number in the hp section. 2. Where is your fifth trained skill from? 3. Please mark a shard slot in magic items and list your shard there.&nbsp; 1. I had changed my array and must have forgot to update the conditionals. &nbsp;I updated the conditionals to match the Total HP in the HP section.&nbsp; 2. An oversight, I removed one of them.&nbsp; 3. Added my shard under Shard -&nbsp;Siberys Shard of Merciless Cold +1.&nbsp; Should be good to go then, go ahead and change your journal to the new char.&nbsp;
Blooper said: Cliff B. said: Returning player here, decided to make new characters, and I have one here for ya lot&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009</a> An eladrin tactical presence lazylord. 1. Please list the ability array you chose and where you dedicated racial and level up boosts.(preferably in the statistics block section) 2. Please list theme abilities in the class/path/destiny features section. 3. Your hit points appear to be incorrect. You are likely attempting to add con mod rather than con score to starting hp. 4. You do not appear to be proficient in ring mail. This may not be a problem for you as a lazylord, though you have one power that relies on hitting. Either way you need to account for the appropriate penalties. I might suggest lead by example and another no attack roll required power such as vengeance as mine for your daily 1 and encounter 3 if you go that route. 5. If you do not choose to remove them, please use the attack workspace and quick lookup area to calculate the attack roll for one of your str attack powers and disciplined counter. 6. Please label what kind of shield you are using. It appears you are using a heavy shield, but that would provide no benefit as you are not proficient, as far as I can see. 7. Please include Fey Step and Disciplined Counter in powers. 8. You do not appear to have chosen a mechanical background: It is recommended, but not required, to do so.&nbsp; 9. Please have at least a cursory background written/thought up to give to other players during the intro section of an adventure.&nbsp; I've taken your advice and decided to grab proficiency with ring mail, as well as change the shield to light (Thought I had heavy shields prof, apologies). Took the auspicious birth background and redid my hit points.
Cliff B. said: Blooper said: Cliff B. said: Returning player here, decided to make new characters, and I have one here for ya lot&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203009</a> An eladrin tactical presence lazylord. 1. Please list the ability array you chose and where you dedicated racial and level up boosts.(preferably in the statistics block section) 2. Please list theme abilities in the class/path/destiny features section. 3. Your hit points appear to be incorrect. You are likely attempting to add con mod rather than con score to starting hp. 4. You do not appear to be proficient in ring mail. This may not be a problem for you as a lazylord, though you have one power that relies on hitting. Either way you need to account for the appropriate penalties. I might suggest lead by example and another no attack roll required power such as vengeance as mine for your daily 1 and encounter 3 if you go that route. 5. If you do not choose to remove them, please use the attack workspace and quick lookup area to calculate the attack roll for one of your str attack powers and disciplined counter. 6. Please label what kind of shield you are using. It appears you are using a heavy shield, but that would provide no benefit as you are not proficient, as far as I can see. 7. Please include Fey Step and Disciplined Counter in powers. 8. You do not appear to have chosen a mechanical background: It is recommended, but not required, to do so.&nbsp; 9. Please have at least a cursory background written/thought up to give to other players during the intro section of an adventure.&nbsp; I've taken your advice and decided to grab proficiency with ring mail, as well as change the shield to light (Thought I had heavy shields prof, apologies). Took the auspicious birth background and redid my hit points. In the future please responded to the list in a similarly numbered form. It is easier for us to check. That being said, you should be good to go now. I'll add you a journal.&nbsp;
Got another interesting one for you gentlemen and ladies, A pixie Cavalier|Vampire... or a stirge as some seem to call it. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204003" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204003</a>
Cliff B. said: Got another interesting one for you gentlemen and ladies, A pixie Cavalier|Vampire... or a stirge as some seem to call it. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204003" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204003</a> 1) You need to fill out your attack and damage workspaces and quick lookups for vampire attacks and cavalier attacks. 2) Your defences are a bit off - mythweavers automatically adds shield bonuses to both AC and Reflex, so that needs to be changed from a shield bonus to a misc AC bonus, and you should not have an armour bonus. 3) You need to fill out the special senses/movement section. 4) You haven't included racial skill bonuses. 5) Your powers should be labelled with how and when you got them (eg Blood Drinker - Encounter 1). Once these issues are addressed we can make a journal for you.
Alrighty did some changes, Hopefully it's been corrected! 1) I have filled it out for Vampire Slam&nbsp;and Strike of Hope, I had to name Strike of Hope as Paladin At-will due to sheet hiccups. 2) I see what you mean, and have fixed it, turning the +2 AC from unarmored agility into a feat bonus, and the +2 from vampiric reflexes into a misc bonus to AC 3) My mistake, it is correct now. 4) I need to slow down aparently &gt;.&lt;, Fixed. 5) I've labled my powers with their type and level gotten, theme abilities and racials are set at level 0
Cliff B. said: Alrighty did some changes, Hopefully it's been corrected! 1) I have filled it out for Vampire Slam&nbsp;and Strike of Hope, I had to name Strike of Hope as Paladin At-will due to sheet hiccups. 2) I see what you mean, and have fixed it, turning the +2 AC from unarmored agility into a feat bonus, and the +2 from vampiric reflexes into a misc bonus to AC 3) My mistake, it is correct now. 4) I need to slow down aparently &gt;.&lt;, Fixed. 5) I've labled my powers with their type and level gotten, theme abilities and racials are set at level 0 Sheet approved and journal made.
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New player have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Nalmir Hedrosh - Wizard|Warlock 5 <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829</a>
Andy P. said: New player have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Nalmir Hedrosh - Wizard|Warlock 5 <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829</a> Hi Andy, welcome to the Guild. There are a couple issues with your sheet: 1)&nbsp;You're missing the skill bonuses from your Armour of Dark Majesty. 2) Your arcana is 2 points too high; if that's due to a background that boosts arcana you'll need to note down that background somewhere. These are both pretty minor things though, so I've set up a journal for you. Once you've filled out the journal and written your macros, you can contact a DM to have it looked over and a token made for you.
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Ashley T said: Andy P. said: New player have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Nalmir Hedrosh - Wizard|Warlock 5 <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1203829</a> Hi Andy, welcome to the Guild. There are a couple issues with your sheet: 1)&nbsp;You're missing the skill bonuses from your Armour of Dark Majesty. 2) Your arcana is 2 points too high; if that's due to a background that boosts arcana you'll need to note down that background somewhere. These are both pretty minor things though, so I've set up a journal for you. Once you've filled out the journal and written your macros, you can contact a DM to have it looked over and a token made for you. Thanks: 0) Spazzed out on the name. Nexkile Hedrosh, not Nalmir. 1) Ah, never planned to use those skills(at least not with the default skill), so forgot about the bonuses. Fixed on the sheet 2)&nbsp;Background: Remnant Legacy (Vestige) +2 to Arcana. Fixed on the sheet.
Gary M said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Welcome to the Guild Living Campaign! Please label your feats. &nbsp;Far Shot and Master at Arms should both be labeled Free (If that is your guild expertise feat and your rogue weapon talent) You have your weapon listed as a Superior Crossbow. &nbsp;Which does not actually work with any of your rogue stuff (you can't sneak attack with it for example) so I'm slightly confused. &nbsp;Are you sure you want to use the superior crossbow instead of getting Sneak Attack? &nbsp;Since you took Backstabber I assume the answer is that you overlooked that a Superior Crossbow cannot be used for Sneak Attack. While you are welcome to take the Improved Cunning Sneak feat, please be vary aware that the Rules of Hidden Club are some of the more complex rules in the edition. &nbsp;Also that some groups will look very unfavorably on those who devote a lot of resources into becoming hidden for a variety of reasons. &nbsp;I'm not saying don't do it, I'm saying it is complicated and during play you might want to note how it affects your ability to contribute to the team. Unaligned is what alignment you are going for with 'none' Your first three items need to be weapon, armor and neck. &nbsp;You did not pick a neck. &nbsp;While the bracers are cool, being alive to move through the trees is probably a good idea. Label your powers. &nbsp;Use and level please. &nbsp;Like it shows you in the video. All of that Mundane equipment goes on the first page under 'other items'. &nbsp;In the long run you will need all of that space for your magic items. You need to break down how you spent your money. &nbsp;I did the math and I got a different number from you (and you will need to redo a thing or two once you get your necklace). You have a Misc +2 which I assume is supposed to be the +2 Reflex for your class. &nbsp;Please put it under class. Please list your skill bonuses somewhere. &nbsp;I don't see where the +2 Athletics is coming from and it makes the job of the DM much easier if you show where you get your stuff so we can quickly check stuff off. Please include things with different bonuses in your workspace. &nbsp;For your character RBA and MBA are really good things to include in there since you use Dex for most of your attacks and your range and melee weapon are different. In your description you list a pet owlbear, but from what I can see you don't have one? &nbsp;You also have not picked a background or theme. &nbsp;While not required they do add a little more depth and power to a character and, since you already have an owlbear written into your backstory, why not take it adventuring with you and be a Fey Beast Tamer? I see you started on fleshing out the character, but if you can take a moment to put a little bit of personality into the character. &nbsp;Likes/Dislikes/Hobbies/Mannerisms can really help the character come alive at table. &nbsp;While the brooding masked mysterious figure is fun to watch in movies it frequently doesn't have the impact at table people are going for. &nbsp;Make sure you make a character that has a personality that is fun to play so the character is more than a sheet of stats. &nbsp;If you want some help or want to do some brainstorming, feel free to talk to your guild mates in the guild skype chat. Respond to the corrections in list form and we can go from there. Alright, take a look now.&nbsp;<a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a>&nbsp;
Asa, when someone gives you a list of things to address, please respond in list form so when we check things again we have the list of what got fixed and how to work from.
I've decided to Mulligan Lanaster a bit, well more like a lot really. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009</a>
Gary M said: Asa, when someone gives you a list of things to address, please respond in list form so when we check things again we have the list of what got fixed and how to work from. I did already respond in list form. I then asked for a bit of time to change everything. I will copy and past it here. Gary M said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Welcome to the Guild Living Campaign! Please label your feats. Far Shot and Master at Arms should both be labeled Free (If that is your guild expertise feat and your rogue weapon talent) You have your weapon listed as a Superior Crossbow. Which does not actually work with any of your rogue stuff (you can't sneak attack with it for example) so I'm slightly confused. Are you sure you want to use the superior crossbow instead of getting Sneak Attack? Since you took Backstabber I assume the answer is that you overlooked that a Superior Crossbow cannot be used for Sneak Attack. While you are welcome to take the Improved Cunning Sneak feat, please be vary aware that the Rules of Hidden Club are some of the more complex rules in the edition. Also that some groups will look very unfavorably on those who devote a lot of resources into becoming hidden for a variety of reasons. I'm not saying don't do it, I'm saying it is complicated and during play you might want to note how it affects your ability to contribute to the team. Unaligned is what alignment you are going for with 'none' Your first three items need to be weapon, armor and neck. You did not pick a neck. While the bracers are cool, being alive to move through the trees is probably a good idea. Label your powers. Use and level please. Like it shows you in the video. All of that Mundane equipment goes on the first page under 'other items'. In the long run you will need all of that space for your magic items. You need to break down how you spent your money. I did the math and I got a different number from you (and you will need to redo a thing or two once you get your necklace). You have a Misc +2 which I assume is supposed to be the +2 Reflex for your class. Please put it under class. Please list your skill bonuses somewhere. I don't see where the +2 Athletics is coming from and it makes the job of the DM much easier if you show where you get your stuff so we can quickly check stuff off. Please include things with different bonuses in your workspace. For your character RBA and MBA are really good things to include in there since you use Dex for most of your attacks and your range and melee weapon are different. In your description you list a pet owlbear, but from what I can see you don't have one? You also have not picked a background or theme. While not required they do add a little more depth and power to a character and, since you already have an owlbear written into your backstory, why not take it adventuring with you and be a Fey Beast Tamer? I see you started on fleshing out the character, but if you can take a moment to put a little bit of personality into the character. Likes/Dislikes/Hobbies/Mannerisms can really help the character come alive at table. While the brooding masked mysterious figure is fun to watch in movies it frequently doesn't have the impact at table people are going for. Make sure you make a character that has a personality that is fun to play so the character is more than a sheet of stats. If you want some help or want to do some brainstorming, feel free to talk to your guild mates in the guild skype chat. Respond to the corrections in list form and we can go from there. Alright. 1. Can do. 2. Whoops I missed that, might need to rebuild my character. 3. I am aware, I was going for a sniper build so I could supply long range damage, sneaking behind the party I would also have a Young Owlbear in close-quarters to help my allies by providing flanking and the damaging aura. 4. Unaligned was too long to show up in the box properly, so I typed "None." 5. I did not realize that I NEEDED to select those as my first three items. 6. Alright. 7. OK. 8. I did not take into account the necklace. Like I said above, I did not realize that I needed it. If you are saying that I miscalculated the amount that I had spent, I apologize and I will fix it. 9. My b, I don't use myth-weaver's often. 10. I will have to dig for that. I am using a character builder and I have no earthly idea why it is a 9. 11. Will do. 12. I did take Fey beast tamer, but I did not see where to write my theme. 13. I made no attempt to make my character seem brooding or mysterious, only masked. I was going to flesh out the character's backstory in a way that matched his kit after the character was approved by you. Seeing that the superior crossbow does not work with sharpshooter, It makes me happy that I did not write out in the general direction I had in mind. Please give me some time to make these adjustments to my character.
Cliff B. said: I've decided to Mulligan Lanaster a bit, well more like a lot really. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009</a> Welcome back sir 1. Your number of Healing surges should be one higher, 3.5 (Cleric) + 3.5 (Warlord) + CON = 8 2. You need to label which of the three options of Dwarven Armor you're wearing (the armor bonus gives it to me but it still needs to be labeled). You also didn't add it's property to your character.&nbsp;Casque of Initiative is not an item. Also the Casque of the thing you want is by tier (heroic/paragon/epic), not by bonus (+1 through +6). Also you need to pay for the Standard Adventurer's Kit so that DM can ignore that you have mundane items at no cost on hand. 3. Currently both your Daily Attack powers are from Cleric's list. Before you are allowed to choose another Encounter / Daily / Utility power from either of your hybrid class, you need to have one from both. 4. Optional I strongly recommend, as a Divine Power Source, to have somebody to call to help you smite the undead. If you draw no mechanical benefit from it, I wouldn't personally mind if that Deity is Cliff Brown (You may want to ask other DMs if they agree with me here)
Juho G. said: Cliff B. said: I've decided to Mulligan Lanaster a bit, well more like a lot really. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206009</a> Welcome back sir 1. Your number of Healing surges should be one higher, 3.5 (Cleric) + 3.5 (Warlord) + CON = 8 2. You need to label which of the three options of Dwarven Armor you're wearing (the armor bonus gives it to me but it still needs to be labeled). You also didn't add it's property to your character.&nbsp;Casque of Initiative is not an item. Also the Casque of the thing you want is by tier (heroic/paragon/epic), not by bonus (+1 through +6). Also you need to pay for the Standard Adventurer's Kit so that DM can ignore that you have mundane items at no cost on hand. 3. Currently both your Daily Attack powers are from Cleric's list. Before you are allowed to choose another Encounter / Daily / Utility power from either of your hybrid class, you need to have one from both. 4. Optional I strongly recommend, as a Divine Power Source, to have somebody to call to help you smite the undead. If you draw no mechanical benefit from it, I wouldn't personally mind if that Deity is Cliff Brown (You may want to ask other DMs if they agree with me here) 1. You're completely right, good catch, and changed to 8. 2. I've labeled it to +1 Dwarven Scale Armor and added it's property, changed the Casque to it's proper name of Casque of Tactics as well as labeled it Heroic, and paid for the standard adventurer's kit. 3. It seems I've had a brain fart when selecting the daily powers, corrected the level 5 daily to Scent of Victory, a Daily 5 for Warlord. 4. Changed my deity to Pelor :P If that's all, I did make Macro's for Augustus and Lanaster (Just gotta change the Inspire Fervor to Scent of Victory) that I would like checked.
Chloe C. said: I have read the basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist&nbsp; I have downloaded the Portable compendium or have access to the online Compendium&nbsp; below is a like to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources.&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204863" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1204863</a> Hi Chloe, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) Please calculate the number of healing surges per day 2) please tag the feats you choose with the reason you have access to them. For example master at Arms is your free expertise feat from the settings of this campaign, and heat Adaptation is probably your level 4 feat. 3) You get Prime Shot or Running Attack, not both 4) Your attack calculations are at the very least inaccurately named. I would suggest you do the math for an MBA and an RBA. An MBA made with the sword you bought would not benefit from the Weapon Focus feat you took, unless you plan to swing your bow as an improvised weapon, in which case all of the math is incorrect. 5) Not wrong, but a suggestion: if you are looking at mixing it up with melee and ranged weapons as a ranger, the Hunter Fighting Style might be a better choice than the Current Archer Ranger (please also be more precise, it is not called Archery) 6) Please list which Fey Beast you choose to tame 7) all your defense calculations are missing enhancement bonuses from the gear you bought 8) Page 3 is awfully bare. Please do an expenditure, and give us some insight into the character you plan to roleplay 9) not sure how you plan on using Riposte Strike, but I would suggest you read that power again and adjust your character or that power choice accordingly. While not mandatory, please know you are entitled to the mechanical benefit of one background. Please take your time to review the above. When you have made changes to your character sheet, repost and list in your post what actions you took in order to correct the above listed issues.
Mulligan on The Widow. - Race change from Githyanki to Eladrin - Changed Array - Changed Powers - Changed Feats - Macros and picture updated in Roll20 as well. I have read the basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist I have downloaded the Portable compendium or have access to the online Compendium below is a like to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a>
Jay R. said: Mulligan on The Widow. - Race change from Githyanki to Eladrin - Changed Array - Changed Powers - Changed Feats - Macros and picture updated in Roll20 as well. I have read the basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist I have downloaded the Portable compendium or have access to the online Compendium below is a like to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> Hi Jay, 1) Improved Swordmage Warding not included in the defense calculations 2) not wrong, war wizards expertise is probably better for you than versatile 3) also not wrong, but not taking 14 Dex to get Improved Swordmage Warding and instead getting a point higher in Int would get you the same AC and a point more in accuracy and damage 4) you forgot to update page 3
baldhermit said: Jay R. said: Mulligan on The Widow. - Race change from Githyanki to Eladrin - Changed Array - Changed Powers - Changed Feats - Macros and picture updated in Roll20 as well. I have read the basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist I have downloaded the Portable compendium or have access to the online Compendium below is a like to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> Hi Jay, 1) Improved Swordmage Warding not included in the defense calculations 2) not wrong, war wizards expertise is probably better for you than versatile 3) also not wrong, but not taking 14 Dex to get Improved Swordmage Warding and instead getting a point higher in Int would get you the same AC and a point more in accuracy and damage 4) you forgot to update page 3 Hi Bald,&nbsp; Okay, I decided to make a few more changes. But I addressed the list.&nbsp; 1. I'm no longer taking Swordmage Warding.&nbsp; 2. I took your advice an went with war wizard's.&nbsp; 3. I did something else.&nbsp; 4. I updated the language and looked for any instance with Githyanki and replaced with Eladrin. Changed the names to reflect Eladrin names. If there's something else, I'm missing it.&nbsp; New Things: N1. I changed the array to:&nbsp;17,15,12,11,10,8.&nbsp; N2. Changed "Arcane Student Who Saw too Much" to "Born Under a Bad Sign" and updated my HP accordingly.&nbsp; N3. Dropped Swordmage Warding, picked up Aegis Vitality.&nbsp; N4. Dropped Improved Defenses, picked up Superior Will.&nbsp;
Jay R. said: baldhermit said: Jay R. said: Mulligan on The Widow. - Race change from Githyanki to Eladrin - Changed Array - Changed Powers - Changed Feats - Macros and picture updated in Roll20 as well. I have read the basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist I have downloaded the Portable compendium or have access to the online Compendium below is a like to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1202805</a> Go for it, Jay
New to the Guild.&nbsp; Played/DM D&D4E in the past.&nbsp; Enjoy the system and like to dabble in the occasional game. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960</a>
Tad S. said: New to the Guild.&nbsp; Played/DM D&D4E in the past.&nbsp; Enjoy the system and like to dabble in the occasional game. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960</a> Hi, Tad, your sheet looks pretty good. A couple issues: "Pagan" is pretty vague. Most/all of the gods in D&D are non-Christian, so that's incredibly vague. There are nature deities if that's your thing. There are fire deities, if that's your thing. You can choose to worship none, if that's your thing, but "pagan" is not very informative. You have no base speed. Humans should be 6. I do not think -1 speed is mechanically possible, but I appreciate your efforts to build a moonwalking runepriest. Word of exchange: Listed as "Leve 1" :-P 15 starting Int confuses me, but is not functionally incorrect, so do not feel the need to change it if that's what you really want. Since all of these are incredibly tiny issues, I will go ahead and make you a journal for your character. Please follow the instructions for making macros and such.
AsaBurns said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Please give me some time to make these adjustments to my character. Hi Asaburns, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) I think you placed your class attack bonus under misc in the attack calculation, but that is minor. 2) please do a break down of the expenditures, as also asked by Gary 3) Please keep in mind that the actions that bring the team home as one are also the actions that lead to a PC being invited again. I saw a line in your background about "hesitating to help his allies", and while you are certainly free to roleplay that, be wary of it effecting the mechanical aspects of your play. This is after all a team game. Please review above, particularly #2.
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Matt W. said: Tad S. said: New to the Guild.&nbsp; Played/DM D&D4E in the past.&nbsp; Enjoy the system and like to dabble in the occasional game. I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960</a> Hi, Tad, your sheet looks pretty good. A couple issues: "Pagan" is pretty vague. Most/all of the gods in D&D are non-Christian, so that's incredibly vague. There are nature deities if that's your thing. There are fire deities, if that's your thing. You can choose to worship none, if that's your thing, but "pagan" is not very informative. You have no base speed. Humans should be 6. I do not think -1 speed is mechanically possible, but I appreciate your efforts to build a moonwalking runepriest. Word of exchange: Listed as "Leve 1" :-P 15 starting Int confuses me, but is not functionally incorrect, so do not feel the need to change it if that's what you really want. Since all of these are incredibly tiny issues, I will go ahead and make you a journal for your character. Please follow the instructions for making macros and such. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Hi Matt, Thanks for the review. Changes have been made. 1. Deity changed to Kossuth 2. Added based speed (Sorry for the clerical error).&nbsp; 3. Added the letter "l" :) 4. Starting Int 15 is for: Superior Reflexes/Reflects the Scholarly nature.&nbsp; I plan on boosting this up at Level 8 (when I get there). Wis and Strength took priority first. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1206960</a> with updates.&nbsp; Will work on Journal gradually throughout the week.&nbsp; Thanks again!
baldhermit said: AsaBurns said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Please give me some time to make these adjustments to my character. Hi Asaburns, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) I think you placed your class attack bonus under misc in the attack calculation, but that is minor. 2) please do a break down of the expenditures, as also asked by Gary 3) Please keep in mind that the actions that bring the team home as one are also the actions that lead to a PC being invited again. I saw a line in your background about "hesitating to help his allies", and while you are certainly free to roleplay that, be wary of it effecting the mechanical aspects of your play. This is after all a team game. Please review above, particularly #2. baldhermit said: AsaBurns said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Please give me some time to make these adjustments to my character. Hi Asaburns, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) I think you placed your class attack bonus under misc in the attack calculation, but that is minor. 2) please do a break down of the expenditures, as also asked by Gary 3) Please keep in mind that the actions that bring the team home as one are also the actions that lead to a PC being invited again. I saw a line in your background about "hesitating to help his allies", and while you are certainly free to roleplay that, be wary of it effecting the mechanical aspects of your play. This is after all a team game. Please review above, particularly #2. 1. Fixed it, thank you. 2. I have done a breakdown of expenditures in the money section. 3. If you look again, it says Aarance hesitates to help his allies only when it means exposing itself. The reason for this is that Aarance feels that he is more help to his party while he is hidden. I did not mean that he would just neglect his party.
AsaBurns said: baldhermit said: AsaBurns said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1176248</a> Please give me some time to make these adjustments to my character. Hi Asaburns, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. 1) I think you placed your class attack bonus under misc in the attack calculation, but that is minor. 2) please do a break down of the expenditures, as also asked by Gary 3) Please keep in mind that the actions that bring the team home as one are also the actions that lead to a PC being invited again. I saw a line in your background about "hesitating to help his allies", and while you are certainly free to roleplay that, be wary of it effecting the mechanical aspects of your play. This is after all a team game. Please review above, particularly #2. 1. Fixed it, thank you. 2. I have done a breakdown of expenditures in the money section. 3. If you look again, it says Aarance hesitates to help his allies only when it means exposing itself. The reason for this is that Aarance feels that he is more help to his party while he is hidden. I did not mean that he would just neglect his party. Wow on your response at number 3. Might have to do with the fact text doesn't convey tone well, but that does not sound very friendly. If you hit Join Game, there will be a journal waiting for you. Please fill that out, and notify a DM either here or on Skype chat to take a look at it.
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I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a>
Dougie said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a> Hi Dougie, good to see you make a new character. However... 1) glaringly, your speed is not 30. 2) please do a breakdown of your expenditures 3) could you please show the math on your HP total? I am not sure how you got to that number 4) could you please show the math on your total number of healing surges. I am not sure how you got to that number 5) rebuking armor, only available in chain mail, does not give you a armor bonus of 8 (quick look up) 6) you do not have a shield bought or equiped, so where does the shield bonus come from ? 7) check penalty, without a minus sign, gets you a bonus to skills, instead of a subtraction. 8) what weapon did you buy? 9) your attack calculation is incorrect, could you please show us how you got to those numbers 10) and your damage calculation is also incorrect, could you please explain those numbers 11) Goliaths are medium creatures 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance. 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power. In all, Dougie, it seems like a quick and rushed job. Please take your time to review above before you repost.
I've decided to mulligan Augustus into a Dwarf Knight (Vampire defender is not for me it seems)&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298</a>
baldhermit said: Dougie said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a> Hi Dougie, good to see you make a new character. However... 1) glaringly, your speed is not 30. 2) please do a breakdown of your expenditures 3) could you please show the math on your HP total? I am not sure how you got to that number 4) could you please show the math on your total number of healing surges. I am not sure how you got to that number 5) rebuking armor, only available in chain mail, does not give you a armor bonus of 8 (quick look up) 6) you do not have a shield bought or equiped, so where does the shield bonus come from ? 7) check penalty, without a minus sign, gets you a bonus to skills, instead of a subtraction. 8) what weapon did you buy? 9) your attack calculation is incorrect, could you please show us how you got to those numbers 10) and your damage calculation is also incorrect, could you please explain those numbers 11) Goliaths are medium creatures 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance. 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power. In all, Dougie, it seems like a quick and rushed job. Please take your time to review above before you repost. Thanks for the Feedback Bald, and yours/Garys Comments fell on listening ears.&nbsp; I had in-fact started again before I saw your post. Link is here Lo-Kag 1) I believe this is now correct on the new sheet @ 5 2) All purchases now listed 3) HP math also included in new sheet. 4) Healing surges for Runepriest is 7+Con Mod so now 11 5) My mistake for putting the +2 onto the core and not enhancement 6) Bought light shield and included it in the expenditure? 7) All penalties now have the - symbol included 8) Purchased +2 Frost Weapon from Item Store? 9) New Attack Calculation - +1/2 Lvl, +4 Str, +2 Prof, +1 Bludg Exp, +2 weapon (+11) 10) New Damage Calculation - +4 Str, +2 weapon (+6) 11) Goliaths are medium creatures - Noted and changed. TY 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features - Noted and changed TY 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix - Believe these to be correct now. TY 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance - Bit of a background has been included with this sheet. TY 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power - I have included a background now. TY Thanks for your time Bald and Gary,&nbsp; hope this effort is better.
Cliff B. said: I've decided to mulligan Augustus into a Dwarf Knight (Vampire defender is not for me it seems)&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298</a> Hello 1. You have a shield bonus marked, but not a shield. Your check penalty is also lacking the shield penalty if you are wearing one (I notice that you have a hand free). Your character is not proficient to wear Full plate, it needs a separate feat to become. (by the look of your feat selection, you probably go to normal plate) Also the level of enchantment on your plate armor makes the base bonus scale (check the compendium entry for the mundane plate armor) 2. Your wealth is nowhere to be seen 3. Keep fleshing out the feel of the character, your mannerism and other sections want to get filled 4.&nbsp; Optional Con being your secondary, the benefit from Auspicious Birth is very small, you might want to look around, for example Arcane Student Who Saw Too Much is really popular on defenders All of these are really nit-picky stuff, so post your choices of changes and you can Do-The-Thing
Juho G. said: Cliff B. said: I've decided to mulligan Augustus into a Dwarf Knight (Vampire defender is not for me it seems)&nbsp; <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1210298</a> Hello 1. You have a shield bonus marked, but not a shield. Your check penalty is also lacking the shield penalty if you are wearing one (I notice that you have a hand free). Your character is not proficient to wear Full plate, it needs a separate feat to become. (by the look of your feat selection, you probably go to normal plate) Also the level of enchantment on your plate armor makes the base bonus scale (check the compendium entry for the mundane plate armor) 2. Your wealth is nowhere to be seen 3. Keep fleshing out the feel of the character, your mannerism and other sections want to get filled 4.&nbsp; Optional Con being your secondary, the benefit from Auspicious Birth is very small, you might want to look around, for example Arcane Student Who Saw Too Much is really popular on defenders All of these are really nit-picky stuff, so post your choices of changes and you can Do-The-Thing 1. Ah, I was thinking of pathfinder again, fixed the armor to plate, as well as changed it to the appropriate base for being level 6 | I forgot to list it, I am using a heavy shield, and due to shield finesse feat there is no check penalty. 2. I forgot that I had gone on an adventure before thanks, changed to 539g 3. It doesn't hurt to have everything done to the fullest, added onto personality traits and added to mannerisms/appearance 4. Good point, I'd actually like the saving throw bonus more then the extra HP, changed sheet to reflect the new HP total and background.
Dougie said: baldhermit said: Dougie said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a> Hi Dougie, good to see you make a new character. However... 1) glaringly, your speed is not 30. 2) please do a breakdown of your expenditures 3) could you please show the math on your HP total? I am not sure how you got to that number 4) could you please show the math on your total number of healing surges. I am not sure how you got to that number 5) rebuking armor, only available in chain mail, does not give you a armor bonus of 8 (quick look up) 6) you do not have a shield bought or equiped, so where does the shield bonus come from ? 7) check penalty, without a minus sign, gets you a bonus to skills, instead of a subtraction. 8) what weapon did you buy? 9) your attack calculation is incorrect, could you please show us how you got to those numbers 10) and your damage calculation is also incorrect, could you please explain those numbers 11) Goliaths are medium creatures 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance. 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power. In all, Dougie, it seems like a quick and rushed job. Please take your time to review above before you repost. Thanks for the Feedback Bald, and yours/Garys Comments fell on listening ears.&nbsp; I had in-fact started again before I saw your post. Link is here Lo-Kag 1) I believe this is now correct on the new sheet @ 5 2) All purchases now listed 3) HP math also included in new sheet. 4) Healing surges for Runepriest is 7+Con Mod so now 11 5) My mistake for putting the +2 onto the core and not enhancement 6) Bought light shield and included it in the expenditure? 7) All penalties now have the - symbol included 8) Purchased +2 Frost Weapon from Item Store? 9) New Attack Calculation - +1/2 Lvl, +4 Str, +2 Prof, +1 Bludg Exp, +2 weapon (+11) 10) New Damage Calculation - +4 Str, +2 weapon (+6) 11) Goliaths are medium creatures - Noted and changed. TY 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features - Noted and changed TY 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix - Believe these to be correct now. TY 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance - Bit of a background has been included with this sheet. TY 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power - I have included a background now. TY Thanks for your time Bald and Gary,&nbsp; hope this effort is better. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : so very wrong.&nbsp; Player Handbook page 16 :&nbsp; Constitution (Con) represents your character’s&nbsp;health, stamina, and vital force. All characters benefit&nbsp;from a high Constitution score. ✦ Your Constitution score is added to your hit points&nbsp;at 1st level. Player Handbook page 27 on gaining levels: Check your class description in Chapter 4 to see how&nbsp;many hit points you gain with your new level. Add those&nbsp;to your total. If you increased your Constitution score,&nbsp;increase your hit points by 1 (as if you had your new&nbsp;Constitution score when you were 1st level). Also, if you increased your Constitution score to an even number,&nbsp;increase your number of healing surges by one. At 4 : check At 5 : Your armor is not tagged as heavy, which makes the AC calculation incorrectly add your Dexterity modifier. At 6 : check. To address the question mark, you did not have a light should bought and equipped earlier. At 7 : check At 8 : On page 2, magic items & equipment it shows a frost weapon instead of a frost warhammer At 9 : check At 10 : under quick look up, why is there a D10+7 damage expression? You only did the attack and damage for one attack, what is this deviation supposed to represent ? At 11 : check At 12: Mountains Tenacity is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest you place it under Misc, or perhaps Class, but certainly not there. At 13 : check At 14 : check At 15 : check
baldhermit said: Dougie said: baldhermit said: Dougie said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a> Hi Dougie, good to see you make a new character. However... 1) glaringly, your speed is not 30. 2) please do a breakdown of your expenditures 3) could you please show the math on your HP total? I am not sure how you got to that number 4) could you please show the math on your total number of healing surges. I am not sure how you got to that number 5) rebuking armor, only available in chain mail, does not give you a armor bonus of 8 (quick look up) 6) you do not have a shield bought or equiped, so where does the shield bonus come from ? 7) check penalty, without a minus sign, gets you a bonus to skills, instead of a subtraction. 8) what weapon did you buy? 9) your attack calculation is incorrect, could you please show us how you got to those numbers 10) and your damage calculation is also incorrect, could you please explain those numbers 11) Goliaths are medium creatures 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance. 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power. In all, Dougie, it seems like a quick and rushed job. Please take your time to review above before you repost. Thanks for the Feedback Bald, and yours/Garys Comments fell on listening ears.&nbsp; I had in-fact started again before I saw your post. Link is here Lo-Kag 1) I believe this is now correct on the new sheet @ 5 2) All purchases now listed 3) HP math also included in new sheet. 4) Healing surges for Runepriest is 7+Con Mod so now 11 5) My mistake for putting the +2 onto the core and not enhancement 6) Bought light shield and included it in the expenditure? 7) All penalties now have the - symbol included 8) Purchased +2 Frost Weapon from Item Store? 9) New Attack Calculation - +1/2 Lvl, +4 Str, +2 Prof, +1 Bludg Exp, +2 weapon (+11) 10) New Damage Calculation - +4 Str, +2 weapon (+6) 11) Goliaths are medium creatures - Noted and changed. TY 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features - Noted and changed TY 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix - Believe these to be correct now. TY 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance - Bit of a background has been included with this sheet. TY 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power - I have included a background now. TY Thanks for your time Bald and Gary,&nbsp; hope this effort is better. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : so very wrong.&nbsp; Player Handbook page 16 :&nbsp; Constitution (Con) represents your character’s&nbsp;health, stamina, and vital force. All characters benefit&nbsp;from a high Constitution score. ✦ Your Constitution score is added to your hit points&nbsp;at 1st level. Player Handbook page 27 on gaining levels: Check your class description in Chapter 4 to see how&nbsp;many hit points you gain with your new level. Add those&nbsp;to your total. If you increased your Constitution score,&nbsp;increase your hit points by 1 (as if you had your new&nbsp;Constitution score when you were 1st level). Also, if you increased your Constitution score to an even number,&nbsp;increase your number of healing surges by one. At 4 : check At 5 : Your armor is not tagged as heavy, which makes the AC calculation incorrectly add your Dexterity modifier. At 6 : check. To address the question mark, you did not have a light should bought and equipped earlier. At 7 : check At 8 : On page 2, magic items & equipment it shows a frost weapon instead of a frost warhammer At 9 : check At 10 : under quick look up, why is there a D10+7 damage expression? You only did the attack and damage for one attack, what is this deviation supposed to represent ? At 11 : check At 12: Mountains Tenacity is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest you place it under Misc, or perhaps Class, but certainly not there. At 13 : check At 14 : check At 15 : check Hey Bald and thanks for the feedback. I really do appreciate the help. At 3 : so very wrong - Re-Read and I was adding the mod every level.&nbsp; My apologies and thanks for highlighting this. At 5 : Your armor is not tagged as heavy, which makes the AC calculation incorrectly add your Dexterity modifier - This has now been corrected. TY At 8 : On page 2, magic items & equipment it shows a frost weapon instead of a frost warhammer - I simply stated what weapon the frostweapon was for clarification. All stats etc still the same but kept it's original title in the equipment list. At 10 : under quick look up, why is there a D10+7 damage expression? You only did the attack and damage for one attack, what is this deviation supposed to represent ? - The V in brackets is for Versatile if I use it 2 handed to gain an additional point of damage. At 12: Mountains Tenacity is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest you place it under Misc, or perhaps Class, but certainly not there - Agreed. With no Race bonus I simply placed it there.&nbsp; It's now under Misc. TY Hope this works now :) TY
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Link I'm not sure I did the initiative thing right due to taking the Battle Intuition feat, but I suspect the DM who reads this all over will know what to do. Thanks in advance for spending the time looking at this!
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PC hasn't started play - has already been mostly checked - item swapped around due to Lumbering Merchant. He already has an existing macro set up. I will revise today or Thursday. The new items/changes: 4500 408 Rod of Corruption +1(Lumbering Merchant at 40% discount) -2520 Accurate Wand of Frost(Lumbering Merchant at 40% discount) -840 Leather Armor of Dark Majesty +1 -520 Sustaining Cloak -15 Adventurers Pact Instead of: 4500 -680 Rod of Corruption +1 -680 Hellfire Accurate Wand +1 -680 Orb of Nimble Thoughts +1 -680 Accurate Wand of Grasping Shadows +1 -840 Accurate Wand of Frost -840 Leather Armor of Dark Majesty +1 -15 Adventurers Pact Basic outcomes: Loses a +1 to initiative(Orb of Nimble Thoughts) - now +2 on sheet instead of +3 Gains +1 to Fort/Ref/Will(Sustaining Cloak) - now 17/18/17 instead of 16/17/16 Gains a +1 to hit/damage(Wand of Frost +2 instead of Wand of Frost +1) and Resist Cold 7(as Wand is now assumed to be in-hand) Loses two wands(Hellfire & Grasping Shadows) Has 85 gold left I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1211222" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1211222</a>
Supr. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Link I'm not sure I did the initiative thing right due to taking the Battle Intuition feat, but I suspect the DM who reads this all over will know what to do. Thanks in advance for spending the time looking at this! Welcome to the guild. The init thing is going to be slightly odd just cause its hard to code in, but your answer and how you got there was mathematically correct so you are good. I don't see what benefit you took from Birth-Blessed. &nbsp;Could you let me know what that was supposed to be (pref put it somewhere easy) You seem to have picked 2 Covenants. &nbsp;You get either Preservation or Malediction, not both. &nbsp;I think you are more Preservation than Malediction. The Preservation Manifestation slides a target it doesn't shift them. Theme utility options are options not automatic. &nbsp;So you can either have the 2nd level utility from your class or from your theme not both. You seem to have only given yourself a +1 bonus to will for the feat Superior Will. &nbsp;Please fix that Please denote where you get certain benefits from. &nbsp;For example your Languages. &nbsp;I assume at level 1 you took Elven and 5 took Dwarven from scholar. &nbsp;What extra training did you take or bonus if you didn't take training what did you put the bonus into? &nbsp;I assume that is Nature Training but just need a little more detail on the sheet. Your Attack workspace doesn't have Enh to hit with your staff for some reason. I would put invoker's defense under conditionals as an extra way to remember it. &nbsp;This is not incorrect and does not need to be changed, just a suggestion. You want to just put the names of the feats under feats as you will be getting quite a few more as you level and will run out of room in the long run. You need to label what category of armor your armor is (Repulsion Leather +1) While this is another 'not wrong' thing I was wondering why Leather over Hide or Chain. &nbsp;Hide would be a pretty decent improvement all around given your Int and Chain would be bad. &nbsp;Just curious here. Give those things a pass and repost when they are fixed. &nbsp;A really good first shot.
Dougie said: baldhermit said: Dougie said: baldhermit said: Dougie said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. Character name is Lo-Kag <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1209970</a> Hi Dougie, good to see you make a new character. However... 1) glaringly, your speed is not 30. 2) please do a breakdown of your expenditures 3) could you please show the math on your HP total? I am not sure how you got to that number 4) could you please show the math on your total number of healing surges. I am not sure how you got to that number 5) rebuking armor, only available in chain mail, does not give you a armor bonus of 8 (quick look up) 6) you do not have a shield bought or equiped, so where does the shield bonus come from ? 7) check penalty, without a minus sign, gets you a bonus to skills, instead of a subtraction. 8) what weapon did you buy? 9) your attack calculation is incorrect, could you please show us how you got to those numbers 10) and your damage calculation is also incorrect, could you please explain those numbers 11) Goliaths are medium creatures 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance. 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power. In all, Dougie, it seems like a quick and rushed job. Please take your time to review above before you repost. Thanks for the Feedback Bald, and yours/Garys Comments fell on listening ears.&nbsp; I had in-fact started again before I saw your post. Link is here Lo-Kag 1) I believe this is now correct on the new sheet @ 5 2) All purchases now listed 3) HP math also included in new sheet. 4) Healing surges for Runepriest is 7+Con Mod so now 11 5) My mistake for putting the +2 onto the core and not enhancement 6) Bought light shield and included it in the expenditure? 7) All penalties now have the - symbol included 8) Purchased +2 Frost Weapon from Item Store? 9) New Attack Calculation - +1/2 Lvl, +4 Str, +2 Prof, +1 Bludg Exp, +2 weapon (+11) 10) New Damage Calculation - +4 Str, +2 weapon (+6) 11) Goliaths are medium creatures - Noted and changed. TY 12) you forgot Mountains Tenacity under race features - Noted and changed TY 13) several of your powers are misspelled, please fix - Believe these to be correct now. TY 14) please give us some indication of your PCs character, traits and appearance - Bit of a background has been included with this sheet. TY 15) while not wrong, nor mandatory, you do not seem to have selected a theme or the mechanical benefit of a background. Either or both would give your character flavor and power - I have included a background now. TY Thanks for your time Bald and Gary,&nbsp; hope this effort is better. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : so very wrong.&nbsp; Player Handbook page 16 :&nbsp; Constitution (Con) represents your character’s&nbsp;health, stamina, and vital force. All characters benefit&nbsp;from a high Constitution score. ✦ Your Constitution score is added to your hit points&nbsp;at 1st level. Player Handbook page 27 on gaining levels: Check your class description in Chapter 4 to see how&nbsp;many hit points you gain with your new level. Add those&nbsp;to your total. If you increased your Constitution score,&nbsp;increase your hit points by 1 (as if you had your new&nbsp;Constitution score when you were 1st level). Also, if you increased your Constitution score to an even number,&nbsp;increase your number of healing surges by one. At 4 : check At 5 : Your armor is not tagged as heavy, which makes the AC calculation incorrectly add your Dexterity modifier. At 6 : check. To address the question mark, you did not have a light should bought and equipped earlier. At 7 : check At 8 : On page 2, magic items & equipment it shows a frost weapon instead of a frost warhammer At 9 : check At 10 : under quick look up, why is there a D10+7 damage expression? You only did the attack and damage for one attack, what is this deviation supposed to represent ? At 11 : check At 12: Mountains Tenacity is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest you place it under Misc, or perhaps Class, but certainly not there. At 13 : check At 14 : check At 15 : check Hey Bald and thanks for the feedback. I really do appreciate the help. At 3 : so very wrong - Re-Read and I was adding the mod every level.&nbsp; My apologies and thanks for highlighting this. At 5 : Your armor is not tagged as heavy, which makes the AC calculation incorrectly add your Dexterity modifier - This has now been corrected. TY At 8 : On page 2, magic items & equipment it shows a frost weapon instead of a frost warhammer - I simply stated what weapon the frostweapon was for clarification. All stats etc still the same but kept it's original title in the equipment list. At 10 : under quick look up, why is there a D10+7 damage expression? You only did the attack and damage for one attack, what is this deviation supposed to represent ? - The V in brackets is for Versatile if I use it 2 handed to gain an additional point of damage. At 12: Mountains Tenacity is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest you place it under Misc, or perhaps Class, but certainly not there - Agreed. With no Race bonus I simply placed it there.&nbsp; It's now under Misc. TY Hope this works now :) TY Dougie, even though the math on your HP is all kinds of wrong, I explained the right way in Skype, and the total is correct, so I assigned you a journal. Please keep in mind if you are going to wield your versatile weapon in two hands that will come with some consequences.
I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1212791" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1212791</a>