baldhermit said: Adam S. said: baldhermit : Let's try it while including this : <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1262973" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1262973</a> 1) that HP count is definitely incorrect. Do you mind showing us your calculation so that we can better assist in where you went wrong? 2) in your attack calculations the ability score is well off, as you are counting the half level bonus twice. 3) in the damage calculation the ability score is oddly different than in the attack calculations, and also incorrect 4) please indicate what kind of weapon your luck blade is. This will also affect your attack and damage calculations 5) please indicate what type of armor it is you purchased 6) what feat did you take that gives you a +3 bonus to damage? 7) please read the entry in the new player check list again on ability scores. 8) where does the miscellaneous +2 bonus to AC come from? 9) not sure why you have two level 4 feats, as you are entitled to three feats and a free expertise feat per Step 8 of the new player Checklist. 10) while not mandatory, you can have the mechanical benefit of one background, as well as select a character theme. Both of these could give your character power and flavor. You seem to have selected neither. If you do, please list them under class features. Please take your time to review above. When you repost, please indicate per number what if anything you changed. If you are not yet part of the Guild Skype chat, please come find us. We answer questions, talk D&D, decide on impromptu games, etc. Find a DM to invite you. My handle is baldhermit. 1) Fixed. I don't know how I calculated it the first time, but now I've done it properly - 12 + 14Con + 4x5lvl 2 and 3) I think I fixed it. Is it better now? 4) Fixed. 5)Fixed. 6)Fixed. It is +2 now from nimble blade and rogue weapon talent. 7) I've dex as my primary but wanted to also have high char and boost my constitution a bit. Should I change it? 8) Can't remember, must've been a mistake. Fixed it. 9)I thought I can choose additional feat as a half-elf. Replaced with expertise. 10) Chose Political Rebel and added Diplomacy and Streetwise to skills list and +1 to checks in those two skills. Not sure how to properly choose a theme. I'll be able to use skype soon, I'll contact you there as soon as possible! At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : incorrect, half level does not apply At 4 : thank you, and that means you will have to include the consequences of wielding a dagger. That means including its proficiency bonus in your attack calculation. You also get either the Rogue Weapon Talent or the sharpshooter Talent, not both. Considering you are wielding a dagger I am guessing you will go for the Rogue Weapon Talent, which also has consequences for your attack calculation as it gives you a class bonus. At 5 : check At 6 : please explain the +2 feat bonus. Read Rogue Weapon Talent and Nimble Blade carefully, do either of those give a bonus to damage? At 7 : you are strongly urged to boost your primary ability, the one you use for attack and damage, at each and every opportunity. At 8 : check At 9 : check, but how did you get a +2 feat bonus to attack as light blade expertise gives a +1 bonus. At 10 : background : check At 10 : theme : in the compendium select Character Themes, and you can read your way through all the available ones. new 11: I am not sure why I did not notice this before, but that neck item is giving you an enhancement bonus to your FRW defenses, and you did not include those in your defense calculations. As a side note : While you are probably looking to have combat advantage often, it is not a given that you will, but rather a conditional/situational bonus and not to be included in the base math. At 4 Added +1 class bonus in attack workspace due to my Rogue Weapon Talent At 6 Removed the +2 bonus to dmg but I left it in attack workspace. Is that correct? At 7 Switched 1 point from con to dex. Is there anything more I could swap for dex? At 9 Yeah, but nimble blade also gives +1 to attack rolls, or am I reading something wrong? At 10 Updated with Dead Rat Deserter theme