baldhermit said: Alistair B. said: baldhermit said: Alistair B. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1407041" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1407041</a> Sorry if I made alot of mistakes, first time creating a character and it was a bit overwhelming. Hi Alistair, welcome to the Guild Living campaign. if you are not yet part of the Guild Skype chat, please contact one of the DMs to get added. My handle is baldhermit. 1) Your stats as listed in the conditional modifier box do not match the listed ability scores. I would recommend you look at step 5 of the New Player Checklist and pick one of the four listed there for your first character. yes, there are a ton of arrays possible and available, but for your first character I would suggest you keep this step simple. 2) for your armor as listed at the top of page 2, please list what type of armor this is (cloth, leather, hide, chainmail, scale, plat) 3) your HP score is off because you calculated leveling five times. But from level 1 to level 5 you only level up four times. 4) you did not include the enhancement bonus of the armor in the AC calculation 5) the class feature section needs filled out. 6) please note that human power selection and heroic effort are not two separate race features. Heroic Effort is your choice from the Human Power Selection race feature. 7) Your Human Defense bonuses are missing from the defense calculation (i would recommend misc) 8) please list your rituals as rituals (bottom right page 2) 9) attack calculations : I am pretty sure you are getting a feat bonus to attack from somewhere. I also think you will be attacking with an implement that has an enhancement bonus. Where does the miscellaneous bonus to attack come from ? 10) damage calculations, again, I think you will be attacking with an implement that has an enhancement bonus. Then you picked up a staff of ruin, what does that do ? 11) while not mandatory, you are allowed to take one character theme, and the benefit of one background. These could give your character more flavor and/or power. When you have had a chance to read above, please respond using the quote function and the same number indicators I did to let us know what (if anything) you changed. 1) I forgot to change the ability scores, but after having a look at them I decided to change them should be fixed now 2) Done 3) In my defense, it was late when I did that I wasn't in complete working order. Fixed to accommodate new stats 4) Done 5) Done, wasn't sure if I should have kept the features at the bottom or not so I just left them, let me know if I need to remove them 6) Misread it, I chose Bonus at-will power and removed heroic effort 7) Done 8) Done 9) From Primal Wrath, which gives me a +1 bonus to the attack rolls of druid attack powers does this bonus not work for At-wills? Also added staff bonus 10) Added bonus from weapon Staff of ruin which has +1d10 damage per plus on crit and whenever I make an attack using this staff, I gain an item bonus to the attack's damage rolls equal to the staff's enhancement bonus. 11) I did have a look at the themes and backgrounds, but after another look I decided to take Animal Master, Although I'm not quite sure where the animal companions abilities should be entered so I put them in the powers section for now. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : I do not understand your math at all this time. As far as I know it should be constitution score + 12 + 5 + 5 + 5 + 5. You have listed 12+1+8+8+8+8. Am I wrong about Druid's HP calculation? At 4 : check At 5 : check At 6 : we still would like you to list which of those two things you are chosing At 7 : check At 8 : check At 9a : I am still not seeing a feat bonus filled out, and I know you have one. At 9b : enhancement bonus : check At 9c : How are you making Primal Wrath apply to Pounce or Savage Rend? At 10 : excellent, why is this second instance of the enhancement bonus to damage not listed in your damage calculations ? At 11 : please note the fey beast from Fey Beast Tamer is a lot sturdier than the creature Animal Master grants you. We usually ask people to list the background and theme at the bottom of the class features, so that in game some DM can quickly find them, if there is need for that. 3) You're absolutely right, when I went to double check the health I read that the HS per day was health per level, I also noticed that my HS per day was wrong thanks to that. Fixed 6) I did enter that, must have forgot to save fixed now eitherway 9a) I filled them out, I'm assuming that the bonus is from Staff Expertise which is +1 to attack, all my other feats only work when the target give me CA or is bloodied. 9c) I put +1 in misc, should it be in feat? 10) Same as 3, sorry I should have double checked it saved properly. 11) Thanks for the tip, I picked it out of RP reasons, but that background will fit just as well I think.
