Warpriest said: An alternative to my little cleric.Aerial the Warlord(Marshal).Seems more manly for saturday games than cleric.*MANLY* <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1382516" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1382516</a> Thanks. Hello, just to be entirely clear, is this a mulligan or a second character? Either way, I've looked over your sheet and got a few pointers and suggestions: 1. By my calculations, you have only spent 12 out of 22 points on your attributes 2. Also, please add your basic array as well as racial and level increases to attributes to the Statistic Block 3. Your HP are wrong, please add your HP calculation (can be as simple as Base HP + Attribute + HP per Level) to the Statistic Block 4. Please add your Surges under HP 5. Your defenses are incorrect: - What is the Misc. bonus to AC? I assume it is your armour, please add it to the Quick Look Up-section - Same as above, what is your Misc. bonus to NADs? The bonus from your Healer's Brooch is an Enhancement bonus, please move it to the correct column - Firesoul grants you a +1 bonus to Reflex (under Misc.) - Warlord grants you a +1 bonus to Fortitude and Will (under Class) 6. Please add your Armor and Shield bonuses to the Quick Look Up section, and tag the "Armor is Heavy" checkbox 7. You still have to fulfill any prerequisites for your free Expertise feat, since Warlord isn't proficient with Holy Symbols, you can not take Devout Protector Expertise 8. Please note the level at which you gained each feat under the Loc. column 9. Technically not wrong, but keep in mind that your Improved Inspiring Word feat scales with your Charisma modifier, of which you have none. However, since you still have a lot of points left to spend on attributes, you might want to invest there 10. Similarly, your Insightful Presence scales with Wisdom and Charisma modifiers, both of which are at 0 11. You're missing a class feature, as you can choose between Battlefront Leader, Canny Leader and Combat Leader 12. +6 AC from chainmail is not an item, as mentioned above, note your armor values under Quick Look Up 13. Your attack rolls under Quick Look Up are wrong. 3[W] means you roll your weapon's damage dice three times, not the attack roll. Also, whether or not they are vs. AC is irrelevant unless you gain bonuses when attacking specific defenses 14. In the same vein, your damage rolls are wrong, please fix accordingly 15. Please note the source and level of each of your powers, for example "Intuitive Strike, Warlord At-Will 1" 16. As with 9. and 10., some of your powers' effects scale with charisma, of which you have none 17. You're missing some of your item powers, namely your shield and gauntlets 18. As with 15., please accurately name your item powers, "Daily Power From Armor" is not sufficient. You could, for example, name it something like "Armor of Dwarven Vigor, Item Daily" 19. Please note the enhancement bonus for each of your items in the Magic Items & Equipment Section 20. Also, please add a detailed breakdown of your expenses under Coins and Other Wealth 21. Please add a short description of your character under Traits or Mannerisms, to give him a bit of personality. It doesn't need to be much, but a few sentences are welcome 22. While not wrong, you can choose a mechanical Background and/or a Theme for your character to give him a bit more flavour or power Once you've fixed the mentioned issues, please reply to this post using the quote function. Cheers