AsaBurns said: baldhermit said: AsaBurns said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1245866" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1245866</a> Welcome to your second character, Asaburns. I have two comments on it that are pretty general before I get into specifics. The first is that I would recommend you wait making a second character until you've played a few sessions in this Guild Living format so you know what you can expect, and the second would be that I think this character is very similar to your primary. While I am not going to stop you from going ahead with this, I would recommend perhaps looking into making something with a different theme and race. 1) Your AC calculation is incorrect, as you do not have a +2 enhancement on your armor your cannot have a +2 enhancement on your AC calculation 2) While you do have a +1 neck item, you do not appear to have it equipped as it was not considered in the calculations for your Fortitude, Reflex and Will defense 3) Placing your expertise feat at the bottom of the page is a good way for people to not notice it. Please place it with the rest. 4) you seem to have missed your level 5 class bonus. I at least cannot find it on your sheet. 5) If you're going to list the conditional benefits of not-raging, also make sure to let us know you know what the benefit is of raging. 6) I do not like telling people how to build their character, but some of your choices seem to be to inconsistent. What does Acolyte of the Veil or Bracers of Brachiation (misspelled) do for this character? These are not wrong, you can have that feat and arm slot item, I just do not see why you would. 7) I find the notion of a bugbear who grew up in a tribe of goblins to be quite interesting. Could you please expand on this a little bit to explain how he came to be a member of the Guild ? Please take your time to review the above, and repost when you're ready. If you have any questions you know where on Skype to find us. 1. Fixed. Sorry about that, Arock was going to have +2 armor in the beginning stages 2. My bad, forgot to implement it. 3. Fixed. This was the way I made it on my first character also, so I fixed it on him too. 4. What? I'm sorry, but I don't know what a level 5 class bonus is. Maybe I did miss it, but I'm pretty sure that everything that should be affecting my character is on my character sheet now. 5. Will do. 6. Acolyte of the veil was selected for the Ki Focus proficiency. I planned on having multiple weapons for Arock, but it seemed that the Mordenkrad was fine in most situations. I also wanted to have training in stealth, since that is something that bugbears are naturally good at. I also imaging that as a defender, shadow step would be useful for relieving pressure cased by enemies on certain parts of the battlefield(shadow step being something I forgot to put on my character sheet, thanks for accidentally reminding me). As for the Bracers of Brachiation Level
5+ Common (seemingly not misspelled by me, you, or the compendium), I like for my characters to have some sort of vertical movement or insurance at least. I always have an irrational fear of outright dying to fall damage if I'm every climbing a tower or something and fail some checks. A climb speed or a fly speed fixes that. Also, swinging through the trees with the ability to stealth would be very useful for many encounters, I would think. 7. Got it. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : check At 4: I was wrong, it is a level 4 benefit, not level 5 : " At 4th level, you gain resist 5 fire. The resistance increases to 10 at 14th level and 15 at 24th level." At 5 : check At 6 : yeah, I was afraid you'd say that. My retort would be the already stated general concern at the top of my previous post. As said, it is not wrong, just will likely see very little use. The Bracers are misspelled on page 2 of your sheet. At 7 : check Since that DR5 is a little thing you can easily fix, I will set you up with a journal.