Alex said: Sulris C. said: Alex said: ( and was replied to in Bold by Sulris C. ) Sulris C. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1679859" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1679859</a> should be extremely lazy lord. My character is set up to never personally make an attack, but instead to attack through granting attacks. Mechanically she is using a one handed spear and shield, but i plan to fluff the spear to be a magical puppeteer's cross that tug on the limbs of her allies (should they choose to go along with it that is). I realized later that I didn't need to splurge on the +2 weapon (because the cheaper version gives the same plus to granted attacks) after I bought it on the guild thread... but since it was a real transaction with another player and I don't want to screw up your economy with new character gold... I will leave it as is. I had a hard time finding an expertise feat that would be beneficial. I went with the tome expertise to boost the displacer beast... it is an extra planar beast that is re-summoned from the feywild if it dies... so i assumed it applies? magic items is where is spent my gold (in other items area) (mundane items in equipment area to help me read it more easily) Correct me if I am wrong: if I ride the beast and we stand next to an ally and an enemy: I will have +1 ac and it will -2 to hit me, the ally will have +3 ac and +2 reflex (essentially, if attacked by the enemy I am adjacent too) and the enemy will grant combat advantage (assuming it can be feared). Hi there Sulris C. I am going to start off with warning you that lazy lords do not always work good in the guild setting. This is because each session is self-contained and the party you play with will vary from session to session. So one session you might have a party with 2 strikers, 2 leaders, 1 controller and 1 defender. Another session you might be in a party with 1 leader and 5 controllers. The point i am making there might not be anyone for you to enable and that will make a lazy lord sad. I'll make a striker for my second character to fix that I have done a check on your sheet and there is some things that needs to be addressed. A lot of these things are about formatting and readability of your sheet for other persons(right now me, but also other DMs that will be involved in later stages of getting the character on Roll20). Some of it might come off as pedantic but we have a lot of persons involved with this so we want to make sure everyone is on the same wavelength. No worries, makes sense With that lets get into it Please make sure that the name you use as player name on the sheet exactly match your Roll 20 name. now it's Sulris C. everywhere. At a glance the stat array looks correct, but I am not sure. Could you
please add what base array you are using so I can be sure? Base array was 16,16, 12, 12, 8 Not sure where you wanted me to put that so it is campaign notes area. (I also decided to switch wis and con while I was at it...) When I check your HP it I get another number, could you show me your calculation
for HP so i can see if i am missing something? Thay background, so add int instead of con -> 13+19 +5 each level thereafter (20) = 52. When i look at your class features there is some Kanji. While I do think the Kanji means one I am not sure so please swap it out
so it is clear. Also please add in the Inspiring Words power under class features as you
did with the pixie powers under race features. Inspiring word added. Kanji just to remind me that it only works on people that can see/hear me, which took up a lot of space when written in English... probably not going to be relevant often... so I got rid of it in my summary... For your theme please list what sort of creature it is as one feature and the level 5 aura feature as another feature. Named beast, added CA (to me) came from level 5 Please
use the exact name and spelling of the feats you want to use, it took me a
while to understand you where taking Ninth Legion feats because I could
not find anything when seeking for 9th. Also please make sure to list where the feat is from etc free for the expertise feat and what levels for the other feats(the loc part in the feat section are great for that). moved levels from description to loc area, spelled out ninth The Fey beast is not a summoned creature so It would not get the
bonus from tome expertise. You probably want to look for another expertise
feat that suits your character. Displacer Beast (monster manual) is the only fey beast companion with a creature type of summoned creature. However if "trained displacer beast" which is typed "fey beast companion" for mechanical reasons is not also a summoned creature I am going to need to go back to the drawing board... You have 5 trained skills but are only allowed 4 from Warlord and I can
not find something that mentions an extra skill. Also one of the tranied skills are arcana that are not on your skill list. Please show me where it is coming
from and/or adjust your sheet. that was from an aborted concept.. forgot to change that back, good catch! Please add in levels and source for your powers. A example would be “Pixie
Dust (e) Racial” or “Adaptive Stratagem(e) Utility 2”. details added Please swap places on your magic items and mundane items, keep the magic
items to one item for each line and specify what sort of magic item it is(Something
like +1 somethingsomething Chainmail armor). The way you have it structured might make it easier for you to read but i have a hard time to check the items as it is now. Also add a breakdown of item costs, do no sweat the mundane stuff in that as per Step 9:Equipment in the new player checklist. places changed, my math was off... so one item removed and left over gold changed... I can not check your defenses properly until the items are updated, but right now i can see you are missing some enchantment bonuses you should have so take a extra look at this. +1 neck, +1 hide armor, light shield, For you Attack and
damage work space please add in Ranged basic attack and Melee Basic attack and
calculate them. This is so I can see you understand how to do it, not because I
expect you to use them. added (hopefully correctly) Please change any occurrence of feet into squares when relating to rule text, this because the rules almost exclusively deals with squares and having feet in there can make for misunderstandings. squared the feet. When you reply to these please tell us what you have done to fix them instead of just writing done or fixed. That makes it so we can easy see that you have understood and fixed the problem and i do not need to hunt on the sheet to see if the fix is correct. As the question about your bonuses: If you are adjacent to a enemy and a ally your ally will get a +2 feat bonus to AC and REF from the Ninth Legion Commander. They will also get a +1 power bonus to ALL defenses from the displacer beasts Displacement aura. This gives them a total of 3 AC, 1, FORT, 3 REF, 1 WILL. You are also granted this +1 power bonus from the aura. You additionally gets partial cover when in your mounts square when you are attacked by a melee or ranged attack, note that you only get this bonus vs those sorts of attacks. If attacked by a burst attack for example you do not gain this concealment. Take your time and look this over and then reply with a post. Thanks for the the feedback! edited to mess with items some more... Still some stuff to fix, anything not mentioned looks good. 2.The place to put the stat array is in the Statistics Block together with your stat increases. added array Also you are short one stat in the array you posted, looks like the 10 is missing. odd shows up on my screen Your HP calculations are correct, but the base HP a warlord gets is 12 and not 13. changed hp to 51 4. I can not read the whole line as i can not scroll in your sheet, but it looks like you are missing the level 5 feature. Obviously you are not as you have told me it is in there but please move it to a new line so it is obvious to other people to. that explains a lot I have been, putting quite a bit of information assuming others could scroll as I could. 6. Yes, the beast you gain from the theme is the Trained Displacer Beast and it is not a summoned creature so Tome Expertise do not work with it. doh, switched over to flame zephyr thing instead 9. I did some fast calculations and i do not get the math of the item cost to add up to 4 500 or less.This is probably because you have used the sell and buy tread to buy some of the items to half price. I can not know this or check it. Please add a summary of all item costs and if you bought any of them from the tread please note that. I usually use the "Coins and Other Wealth" field to do this. I did buy some things but my count was also off The shield slot is the arm slot. So you can either use Shield of Deflection or Bracers of Respite as they occupy the same slot. i'll just go with different shield then Also please note on the shield and armor what sort it is, you know it is light shield and hide, i know it is light shield and hide, but another DM coming in to help at a later stage will not know this. added type 10. Those bonuses needs to be recorded on the sheet. I think you might have added the +1 neck as a misc bonus(if not please tell me what the misc bonus is from). They, and the +1 armor, go into another field. the neck bonus added to enh field instead? shield bonus already added under quick look-up New 13. Please fill in the Check penalty and Speed Penalty boxes added -1 to check for hide armor not sure why i need speed penalty box 14. I think you might had a higher level of armor earlier, the one you have right now only adds its enchantment bonus to intimidate(that would be 1). Righteo changed to 1, i changed a bunch of things and hopefully didn't miss anywhere else that needed to be updated. Take you time and check this over and then respond to this post. やった！！
