Wajih M. said: baldhermit said: Wajih M. said: baldhermit said: Wajih M. said: baldhermit said: Wajih M. said: baldhermit edit for clarity, previous comments: At 1 : While heroic effort is a human race feature, there are a few more you have not yet listed. At 2 : none of what is listed under class features are features from your class. Please look up your chosen class in the compendium and select the class features and specialization options as they apply to your character. At 3 : since you did not name the weapons you used at the top of page 2, it is difficult for me to judge the correctness of these calculations. What sort of bow is this character using? Longbow, shortbow, hand crossbow, etc What is that lightning weapon? Under Quick Look Up I see the longbow and the drow long knife. I do not know which is the lightning weapon, so cannot review that, and I do not know how your character would be able to wield a drow long knife. The chaos storm dagger listed gives a bonus to arcane attacks, of which your character has none. Get your gear correctly named at the top of page 2 first please. Like "Duelist Longbow +1" After that, under Attack and Damage calculations, list what power you are making these calculations for At 5 : As per Step 8 of the New Player Checklist, please state what level or slot each feat takes. You cannot take a multiclass feat for the class you already belong to. At 6 : no, you didn't At 7 : Your character does not appear to have a magic armor purchased as per Step 9 of the new Player Checklist. How do you know that armor would have an armor bonus of 2 as you listed under the Quick Look Up? At 8 : the languages known is incorrect, but we'll get to that when the race features have been completed The gold listed is incorrect, since you do not have to buy a mundane item if you want it enchanted. The 35 gold for a mundane bow would be included in the 1000 gold for the enhanced bow. At 9 : Please reread Step 7 of the New Player Checklist. List the level of the slot each power takes. Aimed Shot, for example, is not a level 1 at will power but rather from an entirely different sub-class than most of your other choices. Betrayal isn't even a power for your class. At 10 : you're quoting my own words back at me. Under class features I see gritty sergeant listed, but not what choice you made with that background, and frankly I do not see how the gritty sergeant background would benefit you. If you took it for the +1 bonus to initiative checks, that bonus is missing from the initiative calculations on your sheet. If you took it to gain proficiency in a weapon the ranger class is not already proficient in, please list what weapon that is. On page 3 I see something listed as "Awe inspiring" and wonder what that is. 1) fixed (I hope because thats the only thing humans get) 2) fixed and i've listed what I can get from my class 3)I've named both my melee weapons 5)I've fixed my list of feats (plz be fixed) 6) this time I've chosen it 7)I have purchased magical armor I think Before I start commenting on the individual points, please, I cannot stress this enough, do two things going forward: * Use the quote function when you reply to this post. * Explain what changes you made. At 1 : Look up human race in the compendium. You will see something about skills, languages, a feat, their defenses, and a choice of two benefits, one of which is heroic effort. At 2 : not done, or at the very least incorrect. Archery style, which one? Aspects of the Wild (several!) are powers, though you could list their names here. It is not clear to me which ones you choose, either from page 1 or page 2 Disruptive Shot is a power, and not a class feature Expert Archer Wilderness Knacks (which ones) Weapon Talent, what does that do? At 7 : please list an armor purchased at the top right of page 2. Include the type an enhancement of the armor bought. For example Leather Veteran's Armor +2 I can tell that you are struggling with this. So I really recommend that you take your time to review the above. When you're ready, please use the Quote function to repost, and use the same numbers I did to indicate what, if anything, you changed. Please do not just say 'fixed', as that leaves us searching for what was changed. Hopefully correct this time So...when you use Quote to reply to this post, please indicate in writing what you are changing about the sheet. At 1 : still waiting on those race features At 2 : So what do weapon mastery and weapon talent do? At 3 : check At 5 : check At 7 : while you do list the Hero's Hide Armor on page 2, you also still have a studded leather armor listed under Other Items on the bottom of page 1, and a leather armor as well as a Battle Harness Armor listed in Coins and Wealth on page 3. At 8 : check At 9 : check New : 11 : Bracers of the Perfect Shot benefit missing from the damage calculation for long bow attack 12: enhancement bonuses of armor and neck item incorrect in the defense calculations at the top centre of page 1 13 : I did not notice this before, but High Forest Scout is actually a paragon path, meaning you need to be level 11 to even qualify 14 : Dueling Bow and Necklace of Keys are already listed under Magic Gear, meaning they do not need a place among the Other Items at the bottom of page 1 15 : enhancement of the short sword is missing from the attack calculation under melee attacks. 16 : If you look up the Ranger (Hunter) class in the compendium you will notice it gets Healing Surges per day : 6 + Constitution modifier. This characters constitution modifier is 2, healing surges per day should be 8 I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1594908" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1594908</a> 11)I've added the Bracers missing calculation 12)I've re calculated my Armors AC 13)I've removed the high forest scout 14)I've moved the Dueling bow and Necklace of keys 15)I've added the enchantment Sword to the damage calculation 16) I've edited the healing surges At 1 : still not done At 2 : not done At 7 : not done At 11 : not done At 12 : not done At 13 : check At 14 : check At 15 : check At 16 : check I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1594908" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1594908</a> 1} added the race features 2}added explanations for each mastery 7} I've fixed the armor should be placed in the proper place now 11}I've added it properly I hope 12} I've recalculated my armor hopefully its correct At 1 : no, you have not. At 2 : no, you did not At 7 : nothing has changed: while you do list the Hero's Hide Armor (misspelled) on page 2, you also still have a studded leather armor listed under Other Items on the bottom of page 1, and a leather armor as well as a Battle Harness Armor listed in Coins and Wealth on page 3. on top of that the armor class is not correctly listed under Quick Look Up. Please pick one armor first, and let's take it from there. At 11 : not done At 12 : not done
