Han S. said: Generic Gamer said: Han S. said: Generic Gamer said: i have read the Starter's Checklist, and the FAQ's. i do not have time to do the R20 Journal Editing tonight, but rest assured, i will be doing that when i am next able to. here is the character sheet: <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1815578" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1815578</a> Hello, and welcome to the Guild. Please include your starting experience (5500). In the 'Statistic Block', please place a break down of your current ability scores, i.e. the array you started with, the racial bonus to stats, and what stats you chose to boost at level 4. Please place your armor's enhancement bonus in your defenses. I am going to guess that you combined the armor's innate bonus with its enhancement under armor bonus, but please list these bonuses separately. If this guess is wrong though, also please let me know what you were trying to do. For your Magic Items (under 'Magic Items & Equipment') please include the item's Enhancement Bonus as part of the item's name. For instance, for your Accurate Orb of Forceful Magic, please denote it as being +1. Please explain why your Accurate Orb of Forceful Magic's cost has +25 listed. Although the cost is correct, please note that your Armor of Dark Majesty is a level 4 item at +1, not level 3. In addition, please indicate what type of armor it is (e.g. Leather or Hide). You probably mean Cloak of Distortion as your neck slot instead of Distortions. Echoing Dirge is not a legal option as your third Human at-will, per Minor Rulings. Please include an explicit monetary breakdown of all of your purchases under 'Coins and Other Wealth'. (optional) You do not seem to have a mechanical Background, although you are not required to have one. Please take your time to review the above. When you are ready, please use the Quote function to include this message in your response. Let us know what, if anything, you changed about the sheet. Using phrasing like "Fixed" or "Done" is not recommended as it still forces a DM to search through your sheet to see what was changed. 1. Check. 2. Ability Score Set, as well as changed wholesale, since i found that tiefling worked a tiny bit better for the picture i wanted to use (Kinda hard to ignore the little horns on the side of her head.) this is on the sheet. 3. Item Enhancement Bonuses included, as well as Armor of Dark Majesty given the proper Level, and properly listed as a +1 Leather armor. 4:. See point 3 5. the +25 GP to the price of the Orb was just me being stupid and forgetting that this isn't D&D 3.pf, where everything seems to be made to be as inconvenient to the player as possible. 6. Armor of Dark Majesty given proper listing on all counts. 7. Cloak of Distortion Spelling Error fixed 8. Echoing Dirge no longer on list, though that also comes from me changing Agatha's Race wholesale to Tiefling. 9. Explicit Monetary breakdown included. 10. Mechanical Backstory Included: Astrologist. even though it fits what Agatha has done for most of her life, she unfortunately does not meet the "Must be Psionic" Prerequisite. is there any way we can work around this? 11. as mentioned before, Agatha's Race was changed from Human to Tiefling, with the requisite changes applying. Furthermore, minor tweaks to her ability score array. instead of 10, 13, 13, 15, 8, 16, it's now 8, 13, 14, 16, 10, 16. 12. Since Ritual Caster was removed, Agatha now no longer has her giant pile of divination rituals. 13. Agatha now also has an extra item. namely, a Casque of Tactics, LV 4. 1-2, 5-8, 11-13: Check. 3. Apologies if this was unclear, but I mean specifically including your enhancement bonus to AC in the defenses box, and not putting it in Armor Bonus, if you were intending to do that. I ask for this because these are two separate bonuses that scale individually. 4. There's a few things that could use adjusting with this, and this is somewhat my fault for not being clearer the first time. a.) I believe you wrote down Circlet of Second Chances instead of your Casque of Tactics. b.) Your Cloak of Distortion does not give a +1 to saves. c.) You do not have enhancement written down for either your Cloak of Distortion or your Accurate Orb of Forceful Magic. d.) You do not need the level or the cost of the item in these lines because they can be inferred from the enhancement. You can also indicate enhancement by just placing the +1 (or whatever number) at the start or at the end of your item's name. So for instance, your "Armor of Dark Majesty LV 4 (840 GP) Leather Armor, +1 Enhancement", while completely correct, can just be written as "+1 Leather Armor of Dark Majesty", and similar writing can be done for your Cloak and your Orb. Items that scale by tier, like your Casque of Tactics, can be referred to similarly by tier (so "heroic" in this case) instead of enhancement. 9. Your starting gold is 4500, not 5500. 10. Unfortunately no, but to be clear, there is no particular expectation or requirement that your backstory follows your background's flavor text or vice versa. I would recommend deciding what specific mechanical benefit you wanted from Astronomer and choose another background that gives the same benefit. 3. fixed that little blunder of mine 4. A. Fixed, it is now the proper name. 4.B. this one confuses me a little, since every version of "Cloak of Distortion" i could find had " Enhancement Bonus: Fortitude, Reflex, and Will," but if that's wrong, i'll just have to take your word for it. 4.C. Enhancement Bonuses written down. 4.D. i've seen your point, and have thusly simplified what is in the items section. 9. Starting Gold value fixed. i didn't have much issue since i had more than 1000 GP leftover anyway. 10. What i wanted from an Astronomer's Background was the Training in Arcana, so i went ahead and noted that down. thank you for being patient with me.
