Wyatt W. said: baldhermit said: Wyatt W. said: baldhermit said: Wyatt W. said: baldhermit said: Wyatt W. said: i have read the Basic rules/FAQ i have read the new player checklist i have downloaded the portable compendium below is a link to my new character which i have re-made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1523198" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1523198</a> Hi Wyatt. While you are certainly welcome to create a second character, I would recommend you gain some experience with your first character, which was only finalized less than a week ago, before committing to a second. That said, let's review this one. 1) Please list in the statistics block your starting array, racial bonuses and level 4 boosts. 2) The racial feature section is pretty bare, please check the compendium and add the other racial features to your sheet 3) Please tag your feats with the slot they take. 4) please read up on channel divinity, as you skipped it from your class features and they work differently than standard powers 5) Please show us the math for your hit point total, for example in that same statsictics block as the ability score explanation, so that we can see how you ended up with that number. I do not think 57 is correct. 6) Please list the non-magical gear at the bottom center of page 1. 7) For your weapon, please list what type of weapon it is at the top right of page 2. 8) for your chosen powers on page 2, please include the slot they take for your character. Like D1, Daily 1, or Daily level 1 for Majestic Halo. 9) Under Coins and Wealth, please give us a break down of your expenses 10) for your chosen Paragon Path and Epic Destiny, please remove them, mark them between brackets or precede them by a phrase like "later", "planned" or "intended" to not confuse the current level 5 character set up. Not mandatory, but you could choose the benefit of a mechanical background as well as choose a character theme for your character. Once you have had a chance to review my post, please reply using the quote function and use the same numbers I did to indicate what, if anything, you changed on your sheet. 0) i want it to be clear im Mulliganing surgas due to my dislike for his play style not adding a new character. 1) stats and bonuses listed 2) racial features were added to the racial tab as well as the language and power areas. 3) added the level that each feat was taken 4) added channel divinity and description to class features 5) i listed the hp gains and re-did the math and still got to 57. 6) non-magical gear listed in proper place. 7) added weapon type to magical weapon 8) added slot note on powers 9) broke down expenses 10) removed paragon and epic destiny. Q) what seperates a mechanical backround from a regular backround such as the +2 insight from divinely inspired. At 1 : that is not a legal starting array At 2 : check At 3 : check At 4 : check At 5 : check At 6 :check At 7 : I am looking for longsword, bastard sword, broadsword, greatsword, fullblade .. i probably forgot a few. At 8 : Call of Challenge is a U2, Theme power doesn't have a level. But thanks. Check At 9 : check At 10 : check At q : the difference is a back story (background) that you write for your character that includes "fairly quiet woman", "believes in the importance of death" and choosing a WotC published background for a certain benefit such as +2 insight. As they were hidden amongst the class features i had not identified them properly earlier. 1) changed to a legal array 7) changed to longsword 8) added a note that it was a theme power Q) do you need to make a new journal or can i just chane the existing one? At 1 : 18/18/12/12/10/8 is not a legal starting array At 7 : check At 8 : check Q : you can overwrite your existing one New 11: please name the powers you did the attack and damage calculation for. 1) changed the array to not include racial bonus 11) labels added You're good, go ahead and overwrite that journal. Please know there is a game going on, so use /talktomyself to not interrupt that.