Kaleb C. said: Nikolai M. said: Kaleb C. said: Changed my whole sheet basically. Switched to Warlord because I actually had all the materials from it and wasn't just trusting the internet for feats, powers, etc. 1) I have now filled out my XP and adventuring company. 2) Stat lineup is now much better, since I switched classes. 3) I don't know where the +2 feat bonus was coming from, but it has been removed. 4) Feat names have been fixed. 5) I now have my "big 3" 6) My powers now include things such as (Warlord 1 At Will), etc. 7) I have included a Level 5 Daily Power 8) I have listed my known languages. 9) I think my HP total is correct. I have 12+CONMOD starting, and then 5 for each level for a total of 33. 10) I have included a breakdown of my expenditures. 11) I have filled out my attack and damage workspaces. 12) I have added some personality traits, mannerisms, etc. Thank you for all the help! Nikolai M. said: Kaleb C. said: Nikolai, am I clear to make a token too? Heres my sheet link again: <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1774204" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1774204</a> I was unable to perform a full sheet check earlier in the day since it was blank when I had last tried to look. Also welcome to the guild if you have not already joined discord please do so the link is <a href="https://discord.gg/6FGGhfV" rel="nofollow">https://discord.gg/6FGGhfV</a> and if you already have please make sure both your roll20 name and discord name match. 1) Please fill out your current XP, level and adventure company 2) Your stat line up for your class is highly incompatible, Monk relies a lot on Dex for attacks. This means you will be highly inaccurate and do little to no damage with most of your powers. if you are looking to be a dragonborn I would recommend looking at Kapak Draconian 3) Where is the 2 Feat bonus from in you defenses coming from? 4) Please list your feat names as they appear in the compendium, you are also missing your free expertise feat 5) You do not have all of your big 3, which is mention in step 9 of the new player checklist, that are required I see you have armor, which needs its enhancement bonus listed and what type of armor it is, your weapon but are still missing a neck slot. Also as another note with magic items in the guild setting the bag of holding will not do much for you as encumbrance is not a thing that is tracked as long as you are not obviously carrying more than a character should reasonably be able to. 6) For your powers please list where they come from and their level, example Dragon's Tail (Monk At-Will 1), as well as make sure they are listed as their name appears in the compendium 7) You are missing your level 5 daily power 8) Please list your known languages in the proper space 9) HP total is incorrect please provide a breakdown of your math 10) Please provide a break down of expenditure 11) Fill out your attack and damage work spaces as well even if it is just you melee basic and ranged basic attacks. As well as make sure your check penalty under quick look up is filled out even if it is 0 12) This is more than a stat sheet, please fill out the personality traits, mannerisms and appearance as well as some background to give the character more life. Please take your time to review the above. When you are ready, please use the Quote function to include this message in your response. Let us know what, if anything, you changed about the sheet. Using phrasing like "Fixed" or "Done" is not recommend as it still forces a DM to search through your sheet to see what was changed. 1) A glaive is a polearm and heavy blade, not a spear, so your expertise does nothing for you. 2) Impaling Spear is a paragon feat, so you do not qualify. 3) Your proficiency bonus is incorrect. 4) The armor bonus for hide is 3, not 4. 5) You are listed as having a +2 neck item, but your enhancement bonus to your NADs (Fort, Ref and Will) does not match. 6) Please specify the choice of damage type for dragon breath. 7) Please fill in your armor check penalty. 8) Your two attack/damage workspace calculations are identical. Since you have an attack that does not rely on the same calculation (Dragon Breath), please use that to fill in one of the spaces for each. 9) You also benefit from your combat leader class feature, so it can be added to your initiative. 1) Oops. I changed to glaive after adding the feat. I have replaced this with Heavy Blade Expertise. 2) I have replaced Impaling Spear with Polearm Expertise 3)I have fixed the Proficiency bonus. 4) I have fixed the hide armor bonus from 4->3. I was adding in the magic item bonus in the wrong spot. AC should now be correct. 5) The +2 neck item is now properly applied. 6) I have chosen my type of damage and my chosen attack skill for dragon breath. 7) I have added the armor check penalty (of -1) 8)I have changed the second attack and damage workshop thing to Dragon Breath. 9) I have added the benefit from Combat Leader to my initiative. 1) Basic Attack in the attack workspace is incorrect, please know bonuses of the same type do not stack and the highest bonus is used if there is more than one bonus of the same kind (unless they are untyped bonuses). This means you do not get a +1 feat bonus from both your expertise feats. 2) Please try to give a bit of a background for your character as I see it is still blank. 3) Also this had not been mentioned previously but do know you can benefit from a mechanical background and character theme if you so choose to.