baldhermit said: Ashton G. said: baldhermit said: Ashton G. said: I have read the Basic Rules/FAQ. I have read the New Player Checklist. I have downloaded the Portable Compendium or have access to the Online Compendium. Below is a link to my character sheet which I have made using the above resources. <a href="https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1930323" rel="nofollow">https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=1930323</a> (Note, replacing Ghost with this guy) Hi Ashton, 1) please in the statistic block list the starting array, and where you went with the racial bonus and level 4 boost 2) list the bonus feat and bonus skill chosen 3) Please list the armors check penalty 4) please list the armors speed penalty 5) please fill out the speed calculation 6) For Archery mastery please do not list the text of the feat, but rather what power you lose and gain 7) Damage calculation for Twin Strike is incorrect 8) Page 2 magic items, please list the type of bow with its name, please list the type of armor with its name 9) Where does the +2 speed when flying come from? I can find +1 from the theme 10) please list the chosen background on the first page, ideally under class features 11) please fill out parts of page 3. Does not have to be a novel, but give us some idea of this characters mannerism, traits, appearance, behavior. Please take your time to review the above. When you are ready, please use the Quote function to include this message in your response. Let us know what, if anything, you changed about the sheet. Using phrasing like "Fixed" or "Done" is not recommend as it still forces a DM to search through your sheet to see what was changed. 1. Added starting array, including the +2 Human stat boost, and the +1 to Dex and Wisdom from being a special snowflake at level 4 2. Added Bonus Feat (Archery Mastery), and Bonus Skill (Heal) 3-5 Did Speed Calculation, No Armor Check Penalty (Leather Armor), didn't notice the rest hadn't filled out, filled out stuff 6. Changed the wording, replaced Fading Strike with Rapid Fire 7. After discussion on build channel, changed damage calculation (also I was incorrect with all damage calculations due to not including Bracers). Might need to go more into this if still incorrect (aka, i'm reading wrong) 8. Pfft, what type of ranger doesn't use a Great Bow for Bow? For shame, Bald. For shame (Added type and slot for all magic items) 9. This one is prolly up to ruling. Mark of Storm grants a +1 movement bonus while flying, and Windlord also adds a +1 movement bonus while flying. So this is up to the DMs if they wish to allow both bonuses to stack or not. 10. Backround put under Class Features, as well is in the backround slot for perusal 11. Updated backstory and the like. At 1 : check At 2 : check At 3 : please fill out the armor check penalty At 4 : check At 5 : check At 6 : check At 7 : Damage calculation for Twin Strike is wrong (as you were also told in build chat) since Twin Strike does not get ability modifier to damage. Please read twin Strike and compare it to other powers your character has. Damage calculation for both Twin Strike and Rapid Shot is wrong since an item bonus is not an enhancement bonus. I would suggest one of the two misc. boxes. At 8 : You honestly do not want my opinion on greatbows and the people that think they are a good idea. At armor : since you've now specified the character wears leather armor, the armor bonus under Quick Look Up on page 1 is incorrect. At 9 : check At 10 : check At 11 : thank you 3. Armor check penalty of 0 added 7. 1d12 +1 Enhancement Bonus, +2 Item Bonus per shot. A bit confused, as several people have said I get both (as these are not stat bonuses), but need feedback. Changed Rapid Shot to RBA, since it is effectively that, with a -2 (which I included in one of the quick lookup powers). 1d12+5 (Mod)+1(Enhancement)+2(Bracers) 8. Armor changed to 2, added Enhancement (+1) to enhancement under AC.